It comes down mostly to writing pace, i see. Thank you very much!
Not violent, too.
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Fantasy · OwariDa
Yeeaaahhh
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Fantasy · OwariDa
Perhaps...
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Fantasy · OwariDa
First of all, amazing writing. I like how I can vividly picture the scenes from word to word. Secondly, great storyline. I would love to read more chapters, but in the meantime, I guess I have to wait. Character designs are great, I can picture how they look like as you describe every part of them little by little. Overall, a very great novel to read. Looking forward to future chapters, Author!
Rewrite for Spirity
Fantasy · Gaburieru