True lol forgot about that as I was reading the novel
She ruffled her nephew's hair before saying,"Do whatever you want, my little nephew, but… Remember that your past actions will have consequences, and I cannot save you from those." Shen Tian internally narrowed his gaze.
Anime & Comics · ElionAVL
things are getting more and more interesting
ch 30 Star Wars: Spider the Speedy
Movies · TheDevilYouKnow
it's fine chapter was still good
ch 29 Star Wars: Meeting 'the' M***
Movies · TheDevilYouKnow
great chapter
ch 28 Star Wars: Preparations are Prepared
Movies · TheDevilYouKnow
great chapter as always
ch 27 Star Wars: Prepare the Preparations
Movies · TheDevilYouKnow
very nice chapter
ch 24 Star Wars: Hutt and Hero
Movies · TheDevilYouKnow
really good so far. Keep up the good work
ch 22 Star Wars: Suspect the Suspicious
Movies · TheDevilYouKnow
loving the way you write
ch 0 5 Star Wars: Doc the Doctor
Movies · TheDevilYouKnow
alright thanks
thanks
Wa ha ha ha ha, this system is good! Let's continue squandering!
Urban · Chen Ji Tang Hong Dou
saw your request on the forum so I came and checked your story out. It's not bad although, some things like in the description and first chapters are quite confusing. Maybe I would recommend and see if you could formulate your description and sentences a bit differently it would be a massive improvement. Other than that the story has an interesting concept and if you develop it further the story may become potentially really be good. But as said the way some sentences and things are described need to be fixed, otherwise there is just too much confusion in my opinion. If you don't use it already, I would recommend you use grammarly. it has a free version and is very helpful
The game of gods
Fantasy · Darell_Barnes