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Rajat_Sharma_0663
2 years ago
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You can also checkout movie "big hero 6" for tech similar to Reed Richards dimension cutting to move objects from one place to another and Nenobots and Baymax. And movie with robot Atom, Robo fighting was really cool in that movie. Also there are lot of tech you can take from DC movies and comics. I once saw a movie in which they make a drug that forces users mind to remember the good memories in there life. Nice thing to remove depression. Don't know the name of movie. There was also a funny movie where a fat man eats a drug to make himself slim and handsome. Those are some old memories and I can't remember the names If you want to go in civilizations, then there are transformers, mechanical angelic races and some in Ben ten.

Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663
2 years ago
Commented

There is a drug used in movie 'Dredd' which slows the time perception of the world around the user of drug. But it affects the mind so check that out. In movie 'Inception' there was a dream weaver tech that's pretty neat to dig others secret. You can mix it with VR game tech. There is movie 'Lucy' with some what exerted powers of mind. There is Assassin's creed tech to see the DNA memories of ancestors and MC can check the past events without affecting himself.

Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663
2 years ago
Posted

Well written fanfic.... atleast mc is still sane and not thinking with his ---- Overall it's nice background story mc is powerful but for some reason it seems to lack a goal....he is just surviving and making himself powerful.

Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663
3 years ago
Replied to SrCuervo

It ok bro, i will try...well if you also don't mind me, i also have a little wish...can you try to write a novel about wizarding world.. not just about school but broad magical world of HP. Just set character to a person who recently graduated and exploring various communities of wizards. I am sure it will be a nice project for everyone...you can take some inspiration from fantastic beasts movies...

Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663
3 years ago
Posted

Just what the hell is going on...he is making things like Island and castle on his first year...even in Chinese fanfics mc play with mud in his first years...just what is this shit.

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Rajat_Sharma_0663
3 years ago
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I like the character very much... although i am bit confused about that vivraniam or something as i didn't played hp game but overall novel is good.

Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663
3 years ago
Commented

That title brushed memories of a good song.

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Rajat_Sharma_0663
3 years ago
Posted

Ok..the story till now (chapter 18) was good. Bit on the sad theme but not bad... Some points were similar to another hp novel...like one in which Harry's parents were alive and his grandparents died instead....Or he had sister named Rose or something, but in that novel Harry was way too arrogant....well it's just the beginning of 1st year... let's see where story will take us..

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Rajat_Sharma_0663
3 years ago
Posted

Well, there are too many imaginative fantasy in novel. Like hyperspace in the depth of ocean. If ocean depth goes beyond 60km then pressure will be so huge that water will turn into ice aka ICE 6.( Not possible on earth but other planets in space, yes if the planet is completely a water body with strong gravity.)

Rajat_Sharma_0663
Rajat_Sharma_0663
3 years ago
Posted

Well i like author's efforts to even pull this story out...read all the chapters and they were all good...like them very much.... people are constantly complaining that story doesn't follow MCU plot...but why does it need to follow MCU plot...there are literally many parallel worlds in MCU....you can stir the hotch poch as much as you want...mix anything you want....why limit yourself to the plots of movies.....just go for whatever plot....there is phoenix in MCU, in DXD and also in Harry Potter...but who said there can't be various types of phoenix when there are different types of dragons in Harry Potter world...over the top it's fanfic....some times ago i even consider to put Prince of Persia in HP because of sands of times lol...so just enjoy the good fan fic people and stop complaining about plot holes...

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    Book&Literature ISEKAI ONE PIECE ECCHI

    I used many anime and movie plots of one piece so time to give a special disclaimer for that. I don't own any story or animation rights about characters that I used in novel, except for those that I created. This novel is just a fanfiction novel. Any extra characters and different ideologies I used in my novel were completely my own thoughts and have no relations with original story. And I am done. The story is about a Computer Researcher named Max who got reincarnated in one piece with a stupid system. The problem is, his system was just a newly formed system, which can't support him much. There is no function like shop or mission which can give him skills or make him OP immediately. So How will Max survive in the Cruel One Piece world with this kind of system, can he leave his name in one piece world or will he just die like any other mortal with the passage of time, well let's see where his journey will take him.

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