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  • Philosophy Behind The Flesh Weapon: Alpha (Alpha Fanfic)

    Philosophy Behind The Flesh Weapon: Alpha (Alpha Fanfic)

    Video Games

    "Sometimes, I think about... girls!" The very line we hear from the famous weapon made of flesh named Alpha. Beyond that line what does he think besides having a girl by his side? His philosophies in life, his struggles and lastly about his fight for his survival in the land of dawn.

  • Land Warrior

    Land Warrior

    War&Military Action Military Drama Nationalism War Politics Honor

    4.3

    The country of Easting, small and insignificant yet holds some influence in the world's affairs. For years it had faced conflicts internally and externally. From terrorists, secessionists to unfriendly neighbors who wishes to end the country of its existence. Due to numerous threats that the country is facing. A rapid modernization effort by the government was made. One of these initiative is creating a new arm of the special forces thus the new special forces unit Greyhounds was born. The Greyhounds is the best of the elite special forces in the country. Selected from the best of the existing special forces unit. The selection is rigid and very demanding. One out of a thousand pass the cut. The young Lieutenant Alfonso is one of the newest members of the unit. He signs in to prove himself worthy to prove his family name. However as the plot thickens, will he able stay loyal throughout his career? ------------------------------------- Rate of Release: 1 to 2 chapters per week

  • Contract: Making Of A Hero (MLBB Story)

    Contract: Making Of A Hero (MLBB Story)

    Video Games

    The story revolves around a good-for-nothing middle aged man who is still living in his parents basement. He is living a sad life out of bad choices he made in his youth and is suffering because of it. One day a dreadful incident has changed his life forever. The Land of Dawn, a new place where he can redeem himself and his past. He is transported into a different world before he could breathe his last. However all is not for free. A contract must be made to ensure his stay in the land of dawn is of worth. His life to be worth of something and an exchange is required. To be a hero that is the condition. He is not to become an ordinary hero but to be someone whom he see to be fit. By right he has the right to become who he wants to be, easy right? How will Simon lead his life in his new adventures in the land of dawn?

  • Eastern Odyssey

    Eastern Odyssey

    Fantasy Action Adventure Drama Steampunk Exploration Ships Navigation

    4.3

    Will update the synopsis. Sorry for the inconvenience caused! ----------------------------------- Release of Chapters : 2 to 3 chapters per week. --------------- Currently in hiatus... The story will be revamped and edited due to issues cited by readers.

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ursus010: I hope that the story will be interesting and intriguing and yet about the Silk Road, albeit fantastic. I included your work in my library. If there is an update, would you be so kind as to send an announcement!

Respectfully,

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Maybe I shall try fixing the synopsis a bit. Also, the story probably needs a revamp. But, thanks anyway for the review. View More

ursus010: First of all, this is not the story of the Silk Road ... perhaps not the story that I represented. Not a story from the 4th century BC. until the 16th century AD

Engine room That said a lot ... hello Silk Road and hello industrial age!

Characters ... not typical ... usually they are merchants, merchants, spies, travelers, scientists ... and then the player is something new and refreshing ...

Initially, in Synopsis it was possible to misinterpret that it was about the era of the “Great Game”, where spies from Europe and Asia were studying the secrets of each other, regional powers and empires interfered in this game ...

But along the way, this is not about the historic Silk Road, not about the history of the development of espionage activities in Asia, but about the exploration of the fantasy world, fictional empires ... It will probably be fascinating! We'll see!

Therefore, in Synopsis it would be good to immediately indicate that the Silk Road ... this is not in this world, not in historical time, but this is a fantastic world and time is not certain.

Thank.

With interest,

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago

ursus010: First of all, this is not the story of the Silk Road ... perhaps not the story that I represented. Not a story from the 4th century BC. until the 16th century AD

Engine room That said a lot ... hello Silk Road and hello industrial age!

Characters ... not typical ... usually they are merchants, merchants, spies, travelers, scientists ... and then the player is something new and refreshing ...

Initially, in Synopsis it was possible to misinterpret that it was about the era of the “Great Game”, where spies from Europe and Asia were studying the secrets of each other, regional powers and empires interfered in this game ...

But along the way, this is not about the historic Silk Road, not about the history of the development of espionage activities in Asia, but about the exploration of the fantasy world, fictional empires ... It will probably be fascinating! We'll see!

Therefore, in Synopsis it would be good to immediately indicate that the Silk Road ... this is not in this world, not in historical time, but this is a fantastic world and time is not certain.

Thank.

With interest,

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago

marjzach2012: The settings and the names of the places are very familiar. This is good. That means many can relate to the story.There were minimal grammatical errors, but don't worry, the story is understandable...Keep it up!

Land Warrior
4 months ago
Very well, I shall take note of the problems that are pointed and shall do something about it. View More

VateRise: The story has potential, but the quality... I saw some people saying it's actually good... It's not. I had to spend considerable amount of time, figuring some things out. Another reviewer pointed out the tenses, but I will add even more. The sentences are mangled sometimes, that they just don't make sense.

It can be edited, but looking at the release rate, I wouldn't hold my breath. If author takes this (and yaoyueyi I believe) review seriously, and improves. Yep, it could work out. Just read yaoyueyi's review, and you will get the gist of some of the problems. I think her score though, is a bit too encouraging. The other scores? Review swaps... Which I don't understand the purpose of.

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago

VateRise: The story has potential, but the quality... I saw some people saying it's actually good... It's not. I had to spend considerable amount of time, figuring some things out. Another reviewer pointed out the tenses, but I will add even more. The sentences are mangled sometimes, that they just don't make sense.

It can be edited, but looking at the release rate, I wouldn't hold my breath. If author takes this (and yaoyueyi I believe) review seriously, and improves. Yep, it could work out. Just read yaoyueyi's review, and you will get the gist of some of the problems. I think her score though, is a bit too encouraging. The other scores? Review swaps... Which I don't understand the purpose of.

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago

Cynk_Napp: An excellent and concise story of infantry in an modern-future environment. Chapters are well paced and cleanly written. Good job. Worth Reading.

Land Warrior
4 months ago

valeriex: Wow wow
Author, I really like the way you are so descriptive I could imagine like others have said too as if this were a series part of the pirates of the Caribbean.

This is definitely different from what I usually read since I'm all about romance. The writing quality is great but can use some more believably or yes, fixing on some grammar in the sentences I spotted.

I don't really have any complaints because this story had me interested and no chapter was boring.

Please get a cover!! That's how you attract your readers :D

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Reading Status: C6
Hello, this is the "Coded Wulf" the writer of the story. I guess it is time I step up and evaluate my works so far. As of the moment, I am quite certain that my writing style and fluency in grammar is not at par. However, it is also not as appalling as I thought it was. The main issues with my writing is that I happen to forget some of the rules of grammar and writing. We are all human beings and not perfect, however, there is a standard that should be followed.

Since this is a non-contracted story I shall give my own work a 4 star rating. Yes, 4 stars, that is because I find lapses in my writing that I forgot to fix earlier. I shall do something about this issues in the future by probably fixing the entire volume. However as of the moment, I shall focus more on updates and fixing on minor issues.

Second the stability of updates, much is said about the saying "Quality" over "Quantity". I can churn out a lot of chapters but it takes time. I do not wish to waste a lot of time and give you a lot of sub par chapters. Yes, writing a chapter requires planning and its kind of difficult since I am not that experienced yet. 5/5.

Third Story Development, it seems like I made quite a mess right here. Too much action for the first few chapters of the story. For a movie or a T.V. series this may work but a novel I observed from my other reviews are different. I shall take note of this issue and may try to scale things down. I guess this issue happens because I get too excited with propelling the story and forgetting the real essence of the story. Which is to expound and explain the world to the readers. 4/5 stars.

Character Design, I guess making the duke-of-limbs the main character would sound a bit weird. Maybe we can cast Johnny Depp as its actor. Just kidding, as mentioned by a review earlier the main character is not clear yet which is a sign of a bad design for a story. I shall do something about it without breaking the flow of the story. Probably in the next chapters I shall make a clear hint who is the main character. Maybe I should make a poll which is the best and deserving main character for the current cast of characters in the story. 4/5 stars.

World Background, so far so good but we already covered a lot of areas since from the beginning of the story. Like I said earlier I will pipe down with the settings and maybe lengthen the interactions with the characters. World building is okay for now.

I wished for a longer word count in this story. Maybe 2k words per chapter sounds nice but my current chapters only reached 1.9k words at most. I guess it doesn't matter since what matters really is the story.

That's all for the self-review, I hope my readers have enjoyed what they read so far. I will do my best to provide solution to my shortcomings as a writer. Till then, thank you for reading! View More
Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Reading Status: C5
The story sounds like a telenovela or some sorts. A runaway bride who found the love of her life in the wilderness. There are no problems about the story but it sounds a bit generic.

Writing quality is good, 4 stars at most. Your writing style is good, vocabulary and the flow of the dialogue and interactions. However, I do not find it as easy to read. No other issues I find with your writing other than that.

Stability of updates, I do not rate this so I will give you perfect 5.

Story development seems to be a bit generic. Maybe if I read more chapters then I may find it more interesting. Not my cup of tea maybe but your story is captivating enough for me. I will give the story department 4 stars.

Lastly world background, woods of New Jersey. If I am correct you are setting the story based on the real world. So far I haven't seen enough details yet. By the way you described the world however in your description it is understandable and makes sense. For that I will give 5 stars for the world background.

Total verdict will be 4.6 stars. It is a good read and overall entertaining. Quite serious and romantic at the same time. It gives me the vibes of reading a romance novel way back.

That's all for now! Good luck with your writing! View More
A Vow So Beautiful
4 months ago

Cynk_Napp: ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Reading Status: C9
I cannot spot any errors or irregularities with grammar. So far the story is intriguing enough that it does not bore me a single bit.

Here is my verdict about the story.

So far the writing quality is superb. No flaws or mistakes I can see, everything is well written. The story and idea flows well and is well conveyed.

The plot is also good, in the eighth chapter I can see that there's a lot of going on even without dumping a lot of information. All I can say is that the story is well detailed and explained that I can understand the flow of the story.

Characters is also well detailed, their traits and character can be seen clearly. If there's a thing like dimensions in novel writing, I can clearly see them in 3D. Very well detailed indeed.

World Background is also good, it is well explained and you can get a gist about how the world works. Both from the heaven and the mortal realm, you can really define the difference between worlds.

All in all, the verdict I gave is perfect five. Everything in this story is just perfect. I never got tired of reading and it is really easy to read and understand. I have a lots of fun reading this story. I swear I got hungry by just reading the details of the cooking done by the ML of the story.

That's all for my review, and added the story to my library! View More
Xue Yao: The Fox Immortal
4 months ago

yaoyueyi: before I start writing this review, I have to state that this is definitely not the sort of story that I like to read on my own free time, so instead of focusing on character/plot, I'm going to be talking more about writing quality and ways to improve your overall story! also, this is a review of constructive criticism.

writing quality, I scored four stars. it's already good enough for webnovel standards but I can definitely spot some mistakes scrolling through. would highly rec going back and editing some of the chapters to catch some of the mistakes because a few of them are very obvious! other notes that I have:
1) you tend to use a lot of exclamation marks in your dialogue? e.g.

"Deal with him!" One of the well dressed men who brushed up his hair said.
"No need!" One of the well dressed said.
"Very well!" The huge man said and cuts the ropes.

these three phrases were really near each other and they were pretty much all similar in terms of dialogue formatting.
I think you should either format it differently to make it sound more natural & flow better. e.g. something like this:

"Deal with him!" One of the well dressed men who brushed up his hair commanded.
The huge man nodded and grabbed Silvano by his shoulder. He grabbed the rope and then took a knife with him.
"Shall I feed him to the sharks?" He asked the three men in front of him.
The well dressed man replied, "No need."
"Very well, then!" He cut the ropes.

this is just to add a little more variety & interest into your writing!

2) you switch between present & past tense in verbs a lot. I suggest that you stick to one or the other since it makes the reading experience a lot smoother.

onto stability of updates, five stars since I don't see anything wrong.
I didn't pay as much attention to story development, but from what I'm seeing, there's definitely a lot happening so that's good and exciting!
for character design & world building, the only thing I have to say is that a lot of characters and world are being introduced to the readers in this really short time frame of 10 chapters. this might be a little overwhelming for some, and I got a little confused about who everyone was in the middle of all the action. it would be a lot better for the readers if you took a little more time describing the characters! I also noticed a trend of all these mini info-dumps in the start of each chapter & I would say to cut down on those too; give the readers more time to adjust to your world.
overall though, for those two, I both rated four stars since the setting is fairly unique and the characters aren't that bad. :)

some overall tips I have:
1) please get a cover haha. another reviewer stated this but a cover (or even an image) would help get a lot of readers for this story! readers generally click for covers so getting a cover would help a lot.
2) I would suggest to make the synopsis a little less dense with world information? right now, the current synopsis has a lot of background info and it doesn't do what the purpose of the synopsis on webnovel is: to draw in readers. I would suggest to make it more catchy, save the world info for the story itself, and perhaps introduce the protagonist(s) of this story!

anyways, hope this review helped you out in some way. :) I think it's a really interesting premise and this story definitely has a lot of potential! I definitely wouldn't say that this is the type of story that readers on webnovel are super attracted to (though I don't really know; I'm more of a romance reader haha), but if you keep the updates good & continue posting good chapters, I'm sure you'll get a lot of readers too. :D it's really nice to see a refreshing story on this site!
most other reviews have already said whatever other praise I could think of, so this review mostly consisted of tips that I thought the story could improve on! tried not to be too harsh with reviewing but I genuinely think that this story can go places.
good luck with the rest of this novel! :D

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Reading Status: C4
So this is a compilation of poems, am I correct? So far the poems written in the book is good. Every poem that is written per chapter tells a story in detail. It is unique since most stories are written by prose or maybe I have not encountered such work of literature.

My opinions about the work is it is unique and mysterious. You have to analyze the meaning of the poem to get the gist of the story. It's a good read all in all. View More
Love Whispers Of Elementals (Cynk Napp)
4 months ago

_Sha: I like everything about this story from the start. The narration is excellent in its own way. ☺ The author is doing good job I hope author could keep this pace in future😊 I'll review again after reading more chapters, every chapter is new revelation.😇 ....

Land Warrior
4 months ago

moleypotato: I say, bai, your story captivated me. And to end up scrolling withoit anymore chapters broke my heart. I like seas, i like adventures. This story is definitely my cup of tea.

It's in to my library! Hoping for more chapters author!




Btw, you need cover asap. In that way, you'll attract more readers. :))

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago

Mavislin11: If this site has a 10 stars option, I'd give it to you for your choice of words. Creativity is laced within this novel, fantastic world building. Looking forward for more.

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Reading Status: C6
Very interesting, this story holds a lot of potential. The writing is also good that it made me understand the story quite easily. I cannot spot errors and the flow is just harmonious. The concept is good so as the character design so far in the past six chapters. This story is a good read, I shall put this in my library for future reading. View More
END Initiated...
4 months ago

Krizzeir: Good world building, feels great. The characters are depicted well too. I like how the story is progressing. It reminds me of the 'Pirates of the Carribean' how the story takes into sea.

Nice story. Will be looking forward to your work. Keep up the good work. It really feels immersive while reading.

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Reading Status: C6
I rate this one close to 5 stars with a 0.2 difference Good writing style and story. A love/seduction story with a system? Seems like a new genre in cultivation stories. Nice idea, all I can say is this is pretty interesting for a romance story. I enjoyed reading all the six chapters so far. I hope that you will continue writing the story. This type of story is not my cup of tea but I have an eye for unique ones. So, I will place this story in my library.

P.S. Come to think of it, I am now interested to write a romance novel myself. Buuut, I shall focus on my stories for now. Once again, thank you for introducing this novel to me. View More
Quick Transmigration: Her Seduction Games
4 months ago
Reading Status: C5
Superb writing style and the system is well explained. You can get the gist of the idea by just reading like, five chapters alone. I say, this story is interesting and deserves the praise it gets. I can tell that the author is adept and well versed in the language from the style he is using. Also, in the part of the story. I never got bored and scrolled down for more. I have placed the story in my library. It piqued my interest!

This story is one of those cultivation stories I am correct? Where there is a system and characters power up based on the system they follow? I find this interesting. View More
Curse the Mainframe!
4 months ago

Rxel: Yet another fantiastic piece of work from the author. There's just something magnetic about the world building they do in their stories that makes for a good reading time. Their choice of words sometimes makes me go 'wow' involuntarily.

One thing to take note of is that the chapters are sometimes rather disconnected, which may cause some readers to be confused.

I have nothing to complain about in terms of grammar and spelling. All in all, a good read.

Keep up the good work!

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago

ShinSungmi: It's an impressive story, and keep up with the good work! The grammar is just right, and creativity is splendid! The entire thing is well-written!

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago

VhielF: I like the story and the plot. It is VERY interesting as to how they would go to China for the silk Road from italy. I am very excited as to how this story will progress!!! I will read more of this and the review will change after a few more chapters. There are a few grammar mistake but not enough to stop me!!!

Eastern Odyssey
4 months ago
Reading Status: C6
I am giving the story a perfect five because I liked it. As far as I have read, character interaction looks ok. The description is very vivid and clear that I can clearly picture the scene of the story.

About the writing quality I could not find any mistakes in grammar. Vocabulary too is impressive, I could see a lot of going on with the story through the way you write.

Next is how you devise your strategies in your battle. While writing this review I took a peek in the next chapter. I read about how you lay-out your plans in strategy making. Especially in how they work using the wedge formation against etc. It really shows you did your homework.

Your story gives me an inspiration in how I will write my future works. Although the story is written in a generic classroom setting. It is unique and can be related to Valkyria chronicles. Yes, that is the story that I can relate to your story.

Once again, thank you for reading my review! View More
The Summoned Kings *Paused*
4 months ago
Reading Status: C8
The way you provided with descriptions is fantastic. The reader can tell what is going on and will not raise questions to the events that happened. Your writing quality is good, impressive perhaps I should say.

The plot is intriguing, artists and CEOs although I hear that these kind of stories are pretty common in the genre. To make up for it you made the story quite a little bit unique. Although chapter five is too early to judge the story. I shall stop reading since this story is not my cup of tea.

All in all I gave you a rating of 4.8 because of your writing style. Also, who gives a "bird" about stability of updates? Quality of chapters should be the main focus of writing novels.

It's a good story with a good style of writing. Keep up your work, it is good I can tell. Sadly I prefer action and adrenaline pumping scenes. Heheheh... View More
Loved him and still love him {Hiatus}
4 months ago

VhielF: If the umayars are identified as enemies, how are they allowed within the country when everyone knows them? Or is this place within enemy grounds since they were captured?

Eastern Odyssey · C3
5 months ago
That is one of the manly insults used in the olden days. I read an article about it and I find those terms hilarious. View More

VhielF: Duke-of-limbs... Something new :D

Eastern Odyssey · C1
5 months ago

VhielF: Duke-of-limbs... Something new :D

Eastern Odyssey · C1
5 months ago

Shiksha_Jerath: Your story brought to mind 'Pirates of the Caribbean' when I read it....All those captains and people on the wrong side of the law....paints a vivid picture in the mind.

It's an interesting premise which is different from the more common trite novels found here and I hope you are able to give the readers something different and exciting.

Just a few grammatical mistakes which doesn't take away from enjoying a good read. They can be corrected later on as you edit the story.

Hopefully, the author will take us over crashing waves and billowing waters.

Eastern Odyssey
5 months ago
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