I can tell this work is good. Will definitely leave a good review!
ch 0 4 A PENALTY OR A REWARD
Action · Dozy_Doodler
Intriguing
ch 0 1 ECHOES OF DESTINY
Action · Dozy_Doodler
Actual goat used for decoys due to the sounds they make.
"We still have time," I calmly commented, contemplating my options. "I could employ my summon. Meroh the goat would serve as an excellent decoy," I mused to myself, considering the tactical advantages at my disposal.
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
This is the FP limit, if MC uses an ability it temporarily uses FP. For example, if an ability costs 10 FP the counter will say [25/35 FP available]. After a skill's cooldown, the 10 FP will be refreshed returning to [35/35 FP]. If there's a need for clarification please let me know.
Total Focus points remaining [35/35]
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
Nice prologue, liked it!:)
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy · Hoku_1
Thank you very much!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
First thing I noticed is the chapter length. It's one of the shortest I see in this platform but the advantage I see is the ease of readability. It seems like the author intentionally made this short and cut down chapters to several parts. Although an interesting concept, its not conventional compared to most works. The story itself is intriguing, with the return of the devil and his conquest to rule the mortal realm. Featuring of different gods from several mythologies and religions in the world, this is an interesting concept. The story holds a good potential. I am giving this story a perfect 5/5 score due to the author's ingenuity and creativity. Thank you for inviting me to review your work. I will add this to my library!
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mr.clay_33811
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
sure
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Awakening
Fantasy · Allen_Clay012
The story has a good start, its not boring. It had a good pace and the characters were relatable. I can tell they had distinct personalities as well... For the writing, the grammar was okay. I havent seen any mistakes so far. The dialogues and prose is easy to read and understand. I bet the MC theres a lot of surprise we see on the way. However, I got a feeling that a potential love story is starting already. I am going to follow this story for more. Keep on writing, you started the story good. It captivated me with the world building as well. I am interested to know how witches relate to the story. Thank you for introducing me this work. Do your best!
Dance with Fate
Fantasy · Harely_Quinn123