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it might have already been killed several times then

excellent story! very chad! dealing with all them feminists!!! 5/5. the mc is totally me bro!!!! . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . I think the author had an interesting idea, but the main character simply acts the same as the character he became, just... smarter? or something, not really sure. it just the same thing. usually these stories are fun because the main characters tries to change how they were, not just embrace the weird cringy character they became also its pretty obvious as you read that the author is a very hardcor mysognist, he really hates women, and always makes sure to humiliate every single female that appears in the story by this "super omega chad sigma" main character, which only makes it cringier... Author you should try to become a better person isntead of being so full of hatred...

Yet another, um, "interesting" novel from Elyon. This time our favorite author tried to dip his toes into making a typical magic academy story the result? subpar, the story doesnt hold togehter well, the narrative is weird and slow, the main character is aloof, dull, and your typical self-insert even worse, apparently he unlocks his powers by having secks with the girls?? this is way too horny to be taken seriously also are they all adults? if this is an academy, aren't they underage?? weird story, probably the weirdest elyon has written yet, i dont even know where its going, and i dont want to find out either... any good thing to note? um, i dont know, there's literally nothing original about this story.

interesting story overall, yet at the same time I can clearly see and read the BIG INSPIRATION to the Genius Archer Streamer novel, like the author doesnt even try to hide how INSPIRED he is! however, its an ok read, but it gets dull fast

thought it could be interesting but it was overall quite a dissapointing read, the pace is slow, the system is introduced very late and very half-assedly, like the author didnt really want to introduce it and felt forced to do it also its weird how the main character is always just with women, or beating women, oh, i just realzied this is the same author as the NTR one, yeah, makes sense... maybe you should try to talk with your mom about your obssesion with abusing women, author, its not healthy

genuinely fun story, the progression is fine, the main character is ok, the side characters are alright, the world background is mysterious and unraveled over time this novel is literally what a good author would do when taking these generic chinese novel premises of "everyone becomes a lord!!!" and all of that, and make it an actual story however, i still wish the system was more in detail, because there's definitely one, the author is just being very sneaky about it and not showing it, so its all just talked, but this is literally a LitRPG novel disguised as Xinxia

loved the part where everyone died again, and again, and again anyways when is he killing the sun?

unfortunately you cannot reject both, author, your main character by default will always be the protagonist, this title is really funny ah right, the review, err, its not good... yeah

i dont know what to say about this story, its honestly really weird it just comes off as both unoriginal and overall too... try hard? like let's get this straight, the author doesnt' have a positive view on females and he clearly shows it with this main character, who uniquely and solely targets females the most like, at least try to manipulate guys too? he just hates women lol overall, if we forget that... not even mid, this novel is bad

honestly a rare case where JKSmanga tries to write something different for a change. the story still feels comboluted and kinda boring most of the time, the main character seems to have autism (i'm not being derogatory, i genuinely thing he has), but overall, i think its ok? i mean, if you want to rank it through mids, i would say this is a solid 8/10 mid the characters are... ok, fine i guess, but sometimes i feel like the author is afraid of trying new, different things. and that's saying a lot because this is probably his most unique novel so far, yet it still feels samey-samey anyways, it's ok

after reading almost all chapters available, I can confidently say this story is... lackluster it is very eh, and confusing, and it feels very slow, barely anything is done, and there's a lot of this weird, family drama between many different families the main character is ok, but it carries this trademarked cringe that every Elyon main character comes with idk blud, its just boring and slow, there's no action or cool progression, the main character just pulls out powers out of his ass and his family completely trust him all the time even when he starts talking nonsense the author bragging ability is commendable, but this time it seemed to simply not be enough also is it me or are all his main characters just the same? i simply can't think of them being different people... well at least its not the same red haired half-elf

I think the author had an interesting idea, but the main character simply acts the same as the character he became, just... smarter? or something, not really sure. it just the same thing. usually these stories are fun because the main characters tries to change how they were, not just embrace the weird cringy character they became also its pretty obvious as you read that the author is a very hardcor mysognist, he really hates women, and always makes sure to humiliate every single female that appears in the story by this "super omega chad sigma" main character, which only makes it cringier... Author you should try to become a better person isntead of being so full of hatred...

Checked it out, was really slow and boring. The mc has yet to even use dragon powers, follows really common tropes seen a trillion times. I did read the original novel, but I didnt really find it all that interesting, and it wasnt even that popular either, this author's other work was what made him popular, so really weird this one just got choosen out of nowhere. There are so many other much better and popular novels that should had gotten webcomics instead. I feel like webnovel is simply giving privileges to JKManga because of his vampire novel, quite lame, honestly.

An incredibly new low for Webnovel, allowing a popular fanfic writer to write a fanfic, using a lot of owned copyrighted IPs and contracting their novel, this is a shame, and it might be taken down at any time too. Please write an original story, and drop this immedaitely, you've lost most of your readerbase now