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Kiikuro_Shichigo

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So, I saw you request a review in the Forums. Since I'm bored, I'm here to write a review on a novel with a single chapter of 2k words. Anyway, I'm half-asleep when I read CH.1, so please bear with me. Bout' the writing quality - top tier! Yeah, I haven't seen someone write good Engrishu on this site for a while. There's no criticism for the wording, but... except Edward... I wasn't given a name. So I was confused reading through his and hers without signs who was who. But still, kinda' like a prologue maybe, so there aren't any names yet, or at least that's what I observed after reading it a single time. Oof, minus points! I was confused! That's a sign of bad writing. JK! Story... I didn't understand shit! Is the author Mexican? Spanish? There were some words I didn't understand. I think they are there as intended, but maybe they're from another language or something... Well, I think the story was good, if I was able to understand it better. As I said, I was half asleep. Hmm... There's nothing to criticize really... There are many to be praised. But this is still a single chptr'd novel, I'll update if it gets updated a little bit more too. One question tho: Is this book for some kind of meme or something? A thug gorilla person? Eren's shirt? You mean Eren from AOT? Cap positioned sideways - and the beastman who wore it was apparently as a gorilla? Is this racism from the author? No, of course, it's not. I was just skeptical. Now, there's my review. Wouldn't add anything. Short but I think I explained my view clearly. Will update later, if it gets 1k chapters or something. Yeah. Humble my ass. Great book: 9/11 - will read again,
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