Webnovel Author: Vlognation0509 - Fanfic Collection

Everything is good but why do commentators have Chinese name?

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Identity reveled to the world at 500 chapters.

How the hell did Aeiden hide all of his movements from president and the underworld king. It seems Ray is not the king but aiden is. It is all same hidden identity melodrama where his he has power as well as resources but is either stopped by ridiculous rules or more ridiculous wife who doesn't want to take husband help and also stupid mc who can find all small characters who bullied him but all his power and money went to drain and he was not able to find a major villain of that arc which led to death of his mom, brother-in-law, mia and all of the security personals.

You lost one of your reader just because of this

Writing quality is good, story is moving smoothly but writing idea of the story is not good. You made a good character have a change of heart and made his do actions that are not morally sound.

Unique and interesting genre of fanfiction with a great use of the tag "system". New design of power gain and different opportunities. I like it a lot 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊.