Webnovel Author: RD_Villam - Novel Collection

RD_Villam

2yr

Replied to AlverSomyer

Thank you for your review. :)

Northmen Saga

Fantasy · RD_Villam

RD_Villam

2yr

Replied to Lancee

Thanks for the review.

Northmen Saga

Fantasy · RD_Villam

RD_Villam

2yr

Replied to katherinelarson_

Thanks for the review.

The opening scene still needs to be improved with additional narration or descriptions so that it can be clearer to the reader what really happened. At this time it is still confusing. But after that, the story goes smoothly. The characters are interesting and the background is unlocked little by little. I was able to read the first five chapters quickly. It's an interesting spy-action story full of potential. Keep up the good work.

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RD_Villam

2yr

Replied to Jonas321

Thank you so much for your review.

Northmen Saga

Fantasy · RD_Villam

RD_Villam

2yr

Posted

Hi. Since this is just the beginning of the story, I can't really rate it too much. But if I may give a little advice, I think the writing style is a bit confusing. The grammar still needs to be checked, and some sentences, especially the long ones, need to be cut into shorter sentences so that they can be better understood by the readers. The tempo and scene switching is also a bit too fast. Some parts need narration and description here and there so that the atmosphere can be felt better. However, the theme of this detective murder story is quite interesting and has potential. Keep on with it and make it better.