The opening scene still needs to be improved with additional narration or descriptions so that it can be clearer to the reader what really happened. At this time it is still confusing. But after that, the story goes smoothly. The characters are interesting and the background is unlocked little by little. I was able to read the first five chapters quickly. It's an interesting spy-action story full of potential. Keep up the good work.
RD_Villam
Northmen Saga
Fantasy · RD_Villam