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bro ive been waiting. yo start hasbeen the best start of a mc in marvel

dope chap

love it

no it was good but if ya kill mc at least keep his sis since we have gotten so much time from her anyways

that ending was hard!

disappointed in chapter ngl.

bro love story. he should use this as leverage threatening to resign as a ninja unless he gets clan status for his fam. cause in naruto what happened to his fam cannot happen to clans. it only happens to regular ninjas.

bruh hopefully it is his kid and he let it happen. damien is one of the best characters in dc. imagine a dope batman like the one in this fic ro teach him.

no way the gigachad is back

gc

gc. when my stones reset ill send some yo way

gc

love this story

gc

bro i love this fanfic but 3 chapter should be like 1 chap. cause its painfully short chapters. like it takes 3 to 4 chaps to finish a scene.

bro you should do a timeskip. alot of people who write marvel fanfics never actually get to thr main story and it seems like your having the sane prob espically since the chapter keep getting shorter and shorter. if you look at the top rankings the fanfics that succed are those who upload once a day and have medium sized chapters even if their bad cause people like consistency the most. i really like yo story.

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