J0ker
Lv 3- Joined Jun 2019
- United States
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Yo light novels haha.
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XP Grind
Marcus is an 18 year old boy who loves to play video games. One day while playing a new game he encounters something miraculous and passes out. When he wakes up he realizes that he can see the same UI from the game he was playing in his everyday life. Armed with the ability to level up and gain skills, follow Marcus on his journey to become the strongest human! Cover is drawn by my good friend Error_Aberrant!
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Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Belthezzor: He is missing one skill book. The first one he too out was the “unarmed combat” book that was red. Then when naming the remaining 4 skill books, you gave him a red “unarmed combat” one again.
XP Grind · C2
Belthezzor: He is missing one skill book. The first one he too out was the “unarmed combat” book that was red. Then when naming the remaining 4 skill books, you gave him a red “unarmed combat” one again.
XP Grind · C2
Quiescent_Rumble: I liked the start of the book very much.
Then it got...childish. Woman in danger, rescue her, use some chapters to help her find a bed. Of course she is beautiful. Who would have thought that? Someones tries to hurt him, he hurts them then heals them and does not even take their money even when he really needs it?
The "story" is too much that of a do-good-boy, boy scout. TOO much of a good guy. It is sickening.
The writing per se is not bad, but it is always describing, never telling a story. It is like you see something on TV and describe it to someone on the phone.
It is not like a book. I am sure there are professional word to describe this problem, but I have no experience in this area. I just know the writing feels weird.XP Grind
Quiescent_Rumble: I liked the start of the book very much.
Then it got...childish. Woman in danger, rescue her, use some chapters to help her find a bed. Of course she is beautiful. Who would have thought that? Someones tries to hurt him, he hurts them then heals them and does not even take their money even when he really needs it?
The "story" is too much that of a do-good-boy, boy scout. TOO much of a good guy. It is sickening.
The writing per se is not bad, but it is always describing, never telling a story. It is like you see something on TV and describe it to someone on the phone.
It is not like a book. I am sure there are professional word to describe this problem, but I have no experience in this area. I just know the writing feels weird.XP Grind
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
J0ker: Honestly I’ve got a ton of basic ideas that I flesh out as I type. I can say though that becoming a CEO or a Celebrity is not all Marcus aspires for.
XP Grind · C10
Darren090909: Great chapter. Please do more. Also, I'm interested in what route you're trying to go. Is he going to be some kind of CEO or celebrity or something?
XP Grind · C10
Kry0genic_: I kind of like that the MC is a total jackass like in some other novels. But we have yet to see if he has limits to what he will do to and for a person.
Thanks for the chapter.XP Grind · C10
Everything_system8: Thanks for the chap! Like how the system isn't super into justice.
XP Grind · C10
YukeliTheAbsolute: J0ker bro...
This novel is amazing, I honestly love it.
Keep up the good work and I'm sure you'll make something that's even more amazing, good luck👍XP Grind · C10
Darren090909: Great chapter. Please do more. Also, I'm interested in what route you're trying to go. Is he going to be some kind of CEO or celebrity or something?
XP Grind · C10
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Nanomancer Reborn - I've Become A Snow Girl? · C1
Kry0genic_: That's probably the charm stat at work..
Wish I had it.... -_-
Thanks for the chapter.XP Grind · C9
