(ON REVISING STORY - That Overpowered Friend) Learning how to write~ Also posting stories in RoyalRoadLegends :)
2019-06-15 Joined Global
I do see passion in your writing, just gotta get better at spelling. The paragraphs are a bit too tight to read but understandable. Interesting read just needs a lot of polishing. :DD
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You go in-depth when explaining scenes, def good quality writing. A good zombie concept for the story, title's almost similar to danmachi anime lol. chapters are quite long though but I guess that's more content.
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Bruh, your writing style is already amazing. It isn't too straightforward yet still have dept on it. Anything else is just as good as your writing, worth giving a try
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Hands down, I'm intrigued, the story has quite the potential. There were times though when the dialogue was confusing as to whom is speaking. Still, definitely worth the read.
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heloo, I'll be uploading chaps each day for now for the prologue, the first arc is still on the making atm. ty for reading though :DD
ch 0 4 IV. Acquaintances?
Urban · Jaxiel
Ayt, another isekai goin to my library. Just like what other comments says, your writing is amazing, you go in depth on certain aspects. this is some good shit.
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