Typo, I’m sorry ):
"WHO THE H*LL DARES TO ATTACK THE GAILLON ESTATE!? SHOW YOURSELF IMMEDIATELY OR I*LL MAKE YOU WISH YOU WERE NEVER BORN!?"
Fantasy · PKTM
Thank you for the comment! I appreciate it a lot, and I’ll keep it in mind while writing. We won’t see much of Alan soon as Kayn sets out for his journey so I wanted to make his character a little bit clearer since he will play a vital role later down the story. That way you’ll also see how he develops. But as you say, I’ll do my best to not make things as repetitive, and do feel free to speak your mind. I’m still very new to writing so I appreciate all feedback <3 Ty for reading, and I hope you’ll keep doing so!
ch 14 The pang of guilt
Fantasy · PKTM
Thank you <3
HI, thank you so much for reading. I’ve been having a little trouble with coming back to writing, however seeing comments like this makes me dissapointed in myself. I feel bad for leaving my precious readers hanging and I promise to get mye head out of the gutter and start writing asap! Expect a chapter today <3
ch 16 Pretext
The World Conqueror Arises In a New World
Fantasy · PKTM