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male LV 13I like to take things one step at a time, simple, if I write I do it for fun so don't hold high expectations. Unless I say otherwise. I mostly do this because it provides clarity and stress relief.
2019-06-16 Joined United KingdomBadges 12
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Dont think I'm the expert on this but, first I bullet point what'll happen in the chapters, and write about those. I say write as much as you feel and when you're tired take a break and come back. I have a goal of roughly 2k works when I don't meet that Id add an extra bullet point on things that could be going on or if its close enough say that's enough. Dont know if that helps but that's my routine.
ch 36 Mock and times*
To Become Unstoppable
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I meant Kirishima's kick to Todoroki's arm broke it and knocked him unconscious. I'll reword that with the previous, Kirishima's sentence.
"Which is how my arm broke, and I lost consciousness from the pain."
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It should be.
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I swear to god! Someone pointed this one out and I fixed it. I'm double-tapping to update from now on.
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Its Kirishima who broke his arm I'll rewrite that, also I've noticed all the stuff you pointed out it'll take a bit but thanks.
ch 19 The Victor!
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is this a Trarags refference?
"Why did you're claw just move what are you tryna get into?" The woman continued with what seemed like a self monologue (which sounded familiar for some reason)
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Sorry, I thought you meant his strength included, yeah Aizwa nullified his regeneration and shock absorption.
ch 0 9 Hospitalized
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Apparently Nomu was engineered so Aizawas erasure doesn't work on him.
ch 0 9 Hospitalized
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Yes his at this points its stronger than canon.
ch 0 8 Fighting and Stalling
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Lol, I just edited some grammar.
Entrance Exam!
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yes I did mean pink.
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Yeah she could, but he was already admitted through the hospital and put in a cast. I just decided to let it heal naturally.
The class was filled and bustling with activity; everyone had something to say, and most signed Eijiro's cast.
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Are you using Italics to convey the tone of words to to show things that should be added?
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He was talking to midoriya, I'll put his name in to show.
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Does this need changing? She's the only other girl around him at the moment.
"So… when are you going to get a girlfriend?" She asked.
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I did thanks for catching that.
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Yeah, I went back and thought I changed the majority of it back to Kirishima, didn't know I missed some thanks for pointing that out.
"Get behind me!" Kiri ran in his direction, and as he passed him, he got into a stance, going full force.
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Think of it like Hulk is stuck in ice and then turns into Banner he shrinks and now has space to move and transforms again breaking out.
Eiji looked down. Getting out of Blastproof, he used the gap to break free from the ice. He closed the distance between them.
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your right.
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I'll be honest I forgot, but it doesn't change the fact he's got to act as a student.
"Why bother wearing extra gear when it'll get in the way of my dazzle?" Ayoyama added.
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