Webnovel Author: TheCabbageLu - Novel Collection

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穿越未来之男人不好当the characters name different but the story is completely similiar

穿越未来之男人不好当the mc name is different but the story is completely similiar

the novel is still ongoing actually and It's not ended yet. It's a huge disrespect when the platform end the novel while the novel itself is still ongoing

I would give this novel 5 stard if I review this novel one or two years ago. but now, I find the novel lacking in characters' development, story development and world building. The ending is rushed

The translation after chapter 60 is terrible. Probably the translation team doesn't even bother to correct the translation. The story is good but I've problem with how the writer plan the story and build the momentum. The satisfying moment that I'm waiting is nowhere to be seen even after I finished reading it. My satisfaction level is just 50 out of 100

ML mother adopted a granddaughter which later suffered kidney failure. She was thinking about getting the kidney from FL daughter. ML mother did took the kidney for her cheap granddaughter which later incite the FL to revenge. ML, as always was being clueless and blamed the FL.

Oh, I remembered what ML mother did to FL so she retaliate. ML mother adopted a granddaughter which later examined to suffer from kidney failure. She wanted to get a kidney from the FL child. The FL tried to prevent it but it happened. The ML mother got the kidney from FL's daughter that incite FL revenge. The ML, as always clueless and blame everything to FL after his mother mishap

it's just the first heartbreak. The second one will be much worse than the current. the sister stabbed ML Mother (ML mother is doing something evil to FL) and directed the play as if the FL did it. The ML as usual is brainless that he directly believe the sister 's lie and let the FL be handled by the sister. The sister torture the FL by forcing her eat spicy hotpot so her throat is destroyed. The FL is starved and disfigured. Her feet are broken too. The ML? as usual, not knowing what is actually happening that I started feeling that he become a CEO out of family. Instead, he divorced the FL (if I'm not mistaken) and went to wed the sister. The FL then adopted by an affluent family that still related to ML. FL's cheap brother is a friend of ML. At that point, ML realized his mistakes and said that he didn't know the sister would do things to the extent of destroying FL. Holy crap .The ML is brainless and abusive, the side characters are mostly evil and the FL is spineless The thing that I found ridiculous: The FL child want to have the 'loving' story like her mother and father. Holy shit. Kid, do you want to be tortured so badly after being tortured for several years in your first half of life?

Two dimensional leads that I don't get the feel even after several chapters. No brain side characters that made me unable to see the growth of the leads. I'm disappointed.

too many loopholes that It's very illogical and make no sense

Really disappointed with this novel. Douchebag ML and the supposedly strong turned to wishy-washy FL. I'm very uncomfortable with how the story progress. A Big No

one of the most disappointing novel i've ever tried to read. There's no character development. The plot is lousy. totally disappointed. It's rare for me to feel like this

been reading the raw chapters. Tbh, the plot is similiar in the beginning but it's entirely different later. I'm confused tho

title please

It started with a good premise until the author created such lousy plot your father was killed by your husband in front of your eyes but you still let it go? This novel emphasized that no matter how despicable your family members are, they are still your family. What the heck? When things gone overboard, like killing your father in front of your eyes would you still say the same thing? The FL character in the beginning of story was likable but now, she wasn't. the same goes to ML and other characters. This novel stressed on the family but it forgot to describe human as an individual.