Webnovel Author: Cloakedinshadow

1yr

Replied to sxliih

I found the cover for my book by searching for free use images online and narrowing my search options down by what I wanted with things like sci-fi, or futuristic. I don't remember exactly where but I hope that's helpful.

ch 0 1 The Pit-Slums

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Sci-fi · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

1yr

Replied to Chinnyban

Hey thanks for the support there! Hope to see you around later on, I've got some plans in store for this one. Just wait and see what I've been cooking up.

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Sci-fi · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

1yr

Replied to Deadcharl

Thanks a lot! Don't worry I intend to keep this one going until its eventual ending. No hiatuses anymore. The motivation is here. Love the support.

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Sci-fi · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

1yr

Posted

In a typical fashion, I (the author) shall be leaving my newest work a 5-star rating. This is a work I'm genuinely passionate about, it doesn't follow the normal cliches and is inspired by a great discussion I had. I hope you guys stick around and see what I've got in store for you guys. I also hope to not let you down. Regardless, like my work or not all the best to you. If you could leave a comment of some sort to help inform of what I can improve on that would be great. I'm an aspiring writer and this is a way for me to get better. I also hope that my audience understands that I am but one person and I too am prone to making mistakes. Thank you very much for your time.

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Sci-fi · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Rager173

See I get what you're saying here but the thing is, the story is being told in the first-person point of view. The character sees this liquid dripping down the wall and doesn't quite know what is off the bat, as such, it is water or sewage.

There's a dripping of water or sewage along the walls, the tunnels above must be leaking once again.

Method to the Madness

Horror · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Posted

You already know the drill. Shameless author back at it again to give myself yet another stellar review. But seriously, I'm fleshing this story out and my writing has advanced compared to my prior works. Try it out, if you like make sure to follow along!

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Fantasy · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Michael_Crew

Thanks for updating me on that. I checked now on both my phone and laptop abd the issue has been resolved. At least on my end from what I'm seeing here looking at my own thing. Not sure if what I'm seeing is what everyone else is seeing but yeah. Perhaops it just takes a while for the updated chapter to be uploaded? I don't really know. But yeah, thanks for telling me bout that problem. Feel free to point anything else out.

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Virtual Renown

Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Michael_Crew

Hey, thanks for helping me out here and nabbing this little error. It should be resolved now, thank you very much for pointing this out.

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to crystalfire

Sorry bout that. That one's also on me I wasn't too organized when I first started writing this thing. Still can't claim to be the most organized. Probably something I should work on. Regardless, thanks for pointing that out to me, much appreciated.

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Michael_Crew

Yea I took a look at it just now. Turns out I did make that mistake. Thanks for pointing that out for me. Much appreciated. Thank you very much.

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Crycks

I may not have been entirely clear in this chapter and if there are any misconceptions I'll try my best to explain them. So basically Eidiri wants to maintain a competitive advantage over the rest of the player base, because of this he doesn't sell equipment made with the Dwarven Son forging technique; rather he uses the equipment with the Dwarven Son technique for himself and those around him. If you still have any questions be sure to let me know.

"Hey kid. I looked at some of your works while you were out gallivanting and all that. All I can say is not bad, not bad. You should be a Novice Forger by now right?"

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Crycks

Thanks for helping me improve my content. I didn't catch these errors that you pointed out before. That's on me, thank you so much for pointing these out. They should be corrected. If you happen to find any more errors like these I would be happy to rectify them.

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Vitamorte

If you would like to elaborate on what you think is messed up here with the timeline I can absolutely take a look at it. But until then I fail to see how the timeline is messed up especially after its only been 2 chapters. He's only taking a test for his Economics course at University.

ch 0 2 It's Finally Out! Tyranny!

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Replied to Vitamorte

Thanks for catching my error there. I meant to say he was a university student. Appreciate it when people call out my mistakes. Sorry bout that.

Rowan lived with his family on the outskirts of the city with his family, and each weekday, he would take the train to Ruaport to attend his university classes.

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Games · Cloakedinshadow

Cloakedinshadow

2yr

Posted

Hello everyone. It's CloakedInShadow here, the author of this work, and I'm here to shamelessly leave a review on my own work. Now before you click off in second-shame from my own shamelessness, I ask that you give my novel a try. You might actually like my work after all. Who knows? Anyways, I'll stop talking here, try out my novel, will you? All right then, signing off for now, -CloakedInShadow