the rewrite was a bit cringy at times but pretty good all together. I'm looking forward to the next chapters a little advice from a fellow author, the longer you put off something the harder it is to get back to it take it from someone with several stories on haitus
I huffed and turned around, leaving the forest and going back to the house. I didn't know what to say to her, so I just walked off back home.
Twilight: Primordial Chimera
Movies · Jamesshinto
that's how you break your hand
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TVD/TO: The Original Wolf
TV · The_Crimson_Writer
w-t-f
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TVD/TO: The Original Wolf
TV · The_Crimson_Writer
so the casual slaughter.....nothing from that?
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TVD/TO: The Original Wolf
TV · The_Crimson_Writer
wouldn't know, from what I can see typing wise, at least has more options
no they have access, it'll be spoken on in future chapters
Race Ancestor - allows kin to learn any skill and receive any changes happening to the owner ( eg. all kin will be evolved by magicules, no matter where they are
With Knowledge Comes Power
Anime & Comics · Master_Livythan
His women are only a bit weaker than him so no, they'll be taken along, Michael dislikes males
I said Tier 18 because the dragon was a creation god. I don't know if both him and Rimuru are Tier 19 World travel doesn't seem that amazing as everyone in this competition can do it so.... these are a start
Yuuki Kagurazaka ???
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Anime & Comics · Master_Livythan
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original Dragonball : Primal Beings
Is Super Saiyan 3 the pinnacle of Saiyan power? Is Super Saiyan 4 truly weaker than Super Saiyan God? Does a saiyan have to give up his heritage to gain strength? Is Divine Ki truly superior to the power of blood? Let's find out *** Writing a fanfic on Dragonball is harder than I expected, if you want it to be different from other fanfics and actually be unique I'm going to try to flush out the dragon ball verse and fill in any plot holes. My opinion of course, any constructive feedback would be appreciated2 Chs 1 Collections
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World Of Glory
What happens when magic meets technology. When a cruel world experiences hope32 Chs 7 Collections
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(Haitus) Blood Of the New Moon
3.6
Sick of seeing these cheesy low breed werewolves disgracing the monsters he admires, when Christian got the chance he took a bite out of their lives26 Chs 639 Collections
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( Haitus )The Uncrowned Dragon King
This world is ruled by the strong. A dog eat dog world where the only thing that matters is strength and who has the bigger fist dictates the rules, where the strong lead and the weak follow. Follow Damian as he tries to overcome his past in this new found world as he tries to gain the power he need so he no longer has to bow down to adversity and maybe stand at the top. will he crumple for the pressure or will he rise from the ashes and rule the world0 Chs 287 Collections
yup
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Anime & Comics · Master_Livythan