Webnovel Author: chocozaph - Novel Collection

In addition I just hope the "tower" has more details written about it as it is a bit complicated to visualize it as well as how it would've worked (if that makes sense?). There's also the action side of it. It's good but it could be improved so much more. One the plays that stood out to me the most is when the MC used [Blast] to kick the fielder in one and a normal kick towards the guard to keep him from going out of the boundary. I think that was a very smart play and I would love to read more plays such as this in the future with more details especially now that the real competitions are finally starting. Reading that part made me look forward to the rest of his smart plays however, so far there's just a few short sentences about them before moving on with the story.

One of the best novels I've read. Really engaging and a page turner. The story in itself is unique and far from cliché. I was already hooked from the beginning. Not only are the characters life like in terms of their thoughts and the ways they were written, the plot is also not predictable. The chapters are also long enough that I immediately get immersed in every chapter. If this was published as a hard copy book, I would honestly buy it on the spot. The only thing I didn't like is that it's not completed yet and I wasn't ready for the sudden "New chapter is coming soon" as I assumed it was already completed before I started reading it. Keep it up! It's such a great read! Seriously can't wait for the next update! [img=update][img=recommend]