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A harem comedy, that features yanderes, what not to love? Welou demonstrates an excellent amount of balance between the comedy and horror of yanderes, the grammar like in his other stories are amazing and makes the world and characters feel alive, and speaking of the characters the yanderes are by far the most interesting and they aren't copy pastes of Yuno Gasai. The world manages to be good enough for the story but there isn't really anything unique except got it being a yandere nightmare/dream. Overall this story is highly recommended by me. Also don't listen to some other people the MC isn't a 'beta, cuck, turbo-virgin', he is just a guy trying to get by in this world, I guess some people were just hoping for another bland, psychopathic, self-insert.

This is one of the most promising Monster girl-esque books on this site. It is exactly what you could want from a Monster girl story. The writing quality is superb, and exceeds the bar for good writing quality on this site; with how characters are grounded and relatable, even in this fantasy-type setting. The updates are consistent and reliable and never make you feel like the author is holding back. The story has a quick-paced flow and doesn't feel rushed, and honestly is some of the most organic storytelling I have ever read from an writer on this site. The characters feel alive and three-dimensional even though the story doesn't even have fifty chapters yet. The world background doesn't contradict the way characters act and has a interesting build of a Urban-Fantasy Apocalypse, which to my surprise has been fleshed out and thought of more than most of the worldbuilding on this site. Overall I see the dedication and passion the author has for this story, and I am looking forward to what comes next in this tale of 'Monster Girl Survival'!

The only good thing this book has is steady updates, and a fast paced story, I highly advise the author of this novel to put some thought into writing before publishing. The grammar is terrible and the chapters are ridiculously short, there is already 15 chapters out with one of them being the author explaining the main character's backwards thought process. Look I am not trying to be mean here, but try to refine your craft before you publish. I see great potential here for this type of story the possibilities are endless; and I see that you passion for this work you have done, it is just disappointing that the full potential isn't being taken advantage of. So my advice is to keep a consistent word count, improve on grammar, and plan out what you want to happen for the story.

Also just a question Parmesan. What is your native language if not English.

The updates are fairly quickly and the novel is fleshed out enough that the story doesn't feel like it is grinding to a halt, and the plot moves along at a steady pace. Though the characters are charming, but their personalities could be more than what they are and excluding a few quirks a lot of the yandere's personality traits overlap one another.

The story is organic and the characters are original and not some run of the mill yandere cast. The main protagonist is somewhat shameless, and has a good sense of humor, and his power system is unique to him which is a major upside. Is he powerful? Yes. Is going to get more powerful? From what I am seeing ,yes. I am hooked on this story and can't to see where it goes.

A slice-of-life story that is nicely drawn out in away that makes the story feel more natural. It started and ended great. There is not much to say without spoilers, except for I highly recommend it.

A really good novel that takes the Yandere trope to a whole new level! It perfectly mashes together the yandere-ness and comedy, All the characters are extremely enjoyable, and don't feel like copy paste of any anime characters. The setting is quite fleshed out for a novel that doesn't even have one hundred chapters yet, and the novel is self aware in a way that isn't annoying and points out tropes that only enhance the humor.