Mostly a fantasy writer with a penchant for epic descriptions of fights and over the top power-ups. I trust only myself and my vocabulary.
2019-09-05 Joined Global
Real talk, I kinda wanted to make him an immortal tank... He got the base skills for it
[Vitality increased by 11!]
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BRUH
"Cole, I... wanted to apologize. At the inn, when you flinched away, I kinda took offence. Being a medical-nin has always been my dream and... yeah, it's a bit of a sore topic for me. Your eyes were a bit - uhh - surprising too. And... that's all actually."
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Thank you for pointing that out <3
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Play with fire and you get burned...
ch 17 Camping (Part 2)
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... Not entirely
ch 16 Camping (Part 1)
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It isn't tho?
ch 16 Camping (Part 1)
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You won't find a party system or exp.
ch 0 3 Familiar faces
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Thanks man. Yeah, those smut scenes are super whack and make little sense. The worst are the ones where the dude does no foreplay at all and the girl is flooding downstairs already.
ch 12 And the Banging Uglies (R 18 + NSFW)
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And to add to the point of stupidity... yeah, that's what I'm going for. Does the MC feel less powerful, sure. But it is more realistic to make sudden and stupid decisions. I'm trying to balance the foolishness out so that it doesn't become a chore to read. Thanks for the comment btw.
ch 15 First class trip
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The thing is, Cole is very much divided in how he sees the people in this world. He knows them from a series that barely compares to real life, and he will suffer for it. Just as he did with Naruto he will with Zabuza.
ch 15 First class trip
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So, for the passive he only has to be in 'contact' with stone or earth. A very general sort of 'contact' is meant here. So even with shoes on, as long as he is on land he can use the passive. For the property changing ability he has to have skin contact with whatever substance he is changing into. I'll probably make Cole run around with flasks of useful substances he can use. For the late-game, the idea was for him to acquire filings of legendary weapons or sealing tools to attain their properties.
ch 0 7 The start to power
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Imma keep it real wit'chu. Kushina was kinda done dirty by the series... (All women in general *cough* *cough*) I don't think I can rectify that without giving Cole a reincarnation ability, and I certainly won't do that. But now onto the point why she isn't in the title, it's just not something that is title worthy, sadly. Konohamaru would also just be the Grandson of the Fourth Hokage and not the Grandson of Hiruzen's deceased wife.
Title: Son of the Fourth Hokage, Jinchuriki of the Nine-Tails, Genin
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Okey-dokey..................................
ch 15 First class trip
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He has a hero-complex and is generally a happy-go-lucky guy, it just hasn't sunk in how weak he truly is. The POV issue... yeah, I know. I have written other fics and used first POV for the MC and third POV for others, but I read through other novels that managed to keep at one perspective and wanted to try it as well. I don't know if at this point going for a first person perspective would be a good call. Thanks for the comments ;)
ch 15 First class trip
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I'm looking at a picture of him and... he got a whiskers-esque mustache *.*
ch 15 First class trip
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Yeah, that would be a smart idea, I just don't know what name I'd give it.
A readable Naruto fanfic. (Naruto, The Gamer, OC)
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