Farah_hana

a trash mc with a trash story development. so many filler chapters with focusing on women asset rather than development of the story. mc is too dumb for a transmigrator and a pervert. i already read many chapters but the paced of the development is so slow because the author is so pervert and a scum to society they decided to include mc oogling to women asset in every chapter. author need to stop writing and become a monk to repair that pathetic mind.story include so many wrong thing like a fucking adult trying to seduce a fucking child.

lately the chapter is focusing on dual cultivation more than the actual task. then mc keep giving immature vibe and kinda hate that kind of mc.

i already read hundreds of cultivations novel and this novel is one of the novel that deserves to be called trash and bottom novel.i think author is just lazy and should stop writing because clearly this novel prove it.the author clearly didn't do research and dont have that talent to write these type of novel. firstly ,the world background is so poorly made.Then about the cultivation system,not only it poorly made but it also didn't make sense. how tf the cultivation stage goes from a world to domain. it should be the domain evolve to a world

this novel is one of the good novel for this genre but there a few problem. first, isn't mc have a simulator that simulate his disciple future then why he didn't use it for knowing where they are.2nd,why he have this wait and see attitude with his disciple, instead of addressing his disciple prob he decide to just wait and address it in the future. especially dugu aotian prone to madness and fallen to demonic dao. isn't in this world there Buddhism and taoism,i think mc can use buddhism/taoism scriptures involving mind/soul to prevent his disciple to succumb to madness.