StephenAfamO

2yr

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Bytra

"Yes, she has one depicting you and Menadion." Faluel nodded. "My mother also has paintings of all of her fellow apprentices, but she made them herself.

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Fantasy · Legion20

StephenAfamO

2yr

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It would take the biggest of balls to get into bed with Saalark

Even for a Guardian, a day would still have only 24 hours. Salaark spent his mornings nurturing her people, the afternoons researching Forgemastering techniques and practicing martial arts, and the nights by hanging out with her friends, her offspring, or her lovers.

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

StephenAfamO

2yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

ch 1298 Great Minds and Fools (Part 2)

Supreme Magus

Fantasy · Legion20

StephenAfamO

3yr

Posted

This book is hard to read because of how Cypher talks. Nothing about his speeches make him sound like a 12 year old. When he warned Gelda saying "I'll let it slide this time" when he was talking to Galex, how often he curses e.t.c. There's nothing about his experience that should lead to this. He's a 12 year old boy who spent his time as a servant and only left the manor a few times. It just doesn't feel right that he sounds like a 30 year old. Also, no explanation is given about how Galex escaped alive when his whole family was killed in his presence, and not only did he escape, he did with part of what the organization that attacked him was likely searching for.