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Others · 1_0Rawkth1_0
Good work, I know that this little upset is only a bump in your journey. I hope I see more stories from you maybe with another country. I know you won't give up, keep writing amazing novels like this one
ch 39 Epilogue: Timeline
History · Mandamus
Well I greatly enjoyed what was written so far, I have not seen a novel like this apart from Tyranny of steel. in my opinion, coming from a European, I don't really understand anything about the religion there but this novel DID help, I also firmly believe religion should stay out of politics, as history has shown us it only leads to conflict. I was really looking forward to seeing Iraq became a powerhouse but people always ruin good things. take a break and start again. I'm not an Arab and I have never been to an Arab nation, however instead of bursting with anger the appropriate response would have been to point out what was wrong and suggest a correction, I hope you continue this amazing story.
ch 38 People are absolutely insane...fucking hell
History · Mandamus
I don't know about you people but I find this Princess disturbingly annoying, I don't know if the author has made her just to infuriate me, I still strongly despise where this is going, Berengar is so out off Character in this chapter that it's plainly obvious the author intends to make them two a thing, which again infuriates me. If the author keeps forcing this relationship then he's shoting himself in the foot. How do expect me to like such an annoying character without ANY development to her.
ch 242 The Princess Arrives I
History · Zentmeister
make her fall for someone else, I don't want to see her with Berengar he has enough, even he said only 2 so 2 it will be.
ch 238 Honoria's Journey Part V
History · Zentmeister
yes that's much better, I was getting worried that she would actually stay with Berengar, I guess she will be like that girl from that new anime Pirate Princess or something, good good, I'm feeling happy it didn't turn out the way I originally thought
ch 236 Honoria's Journey Part IV
History · Zentmeister
Good chapter, I've read so many fanfics with a cold, antisocial, arrogant mc where he's overpowered as hell with no character development. This fic is amazing, mc actually loses something and doesn't act like a prick, I wanted to see a human mc for so long, the other mcs are empty shells with no personality. Don't listen to what others are saying, Izuna isn't nerfed, isshiki otsutsuki fought with both ***** naruto and sasuke who were stronger then in final valley and sasuke even had the rinnegan, Izuna doesnt even have the rinnegan and managed to do some damage to isshiki, he isn't nerfed and others that say he is dont understand isshikis power.
ch 222 215. A Grave Loss
Anime & Comics · ForgottenLife
this mans a hippocrate
Edward wanted to tell her to stop looking at him like that as she would betray Robert with Rhaegar soon. So how could she blame him? Although no one could call it betrayal as the two were not married, Edward considered it this way.
TV · GNaNA
Nice chapter bro
ch 37 I ain't joking
Anime & Comics · Antlike
too forced, I don't like it, he only accepted because of her condition, it doesn't seem right, though I like how you can write conversations smoothly, but I still object to this, there was no need to do this, I bet you only did this to please some fans.
ch 239 My Mother In Law...
Anime & Comics · Doragon
very good. I liked it a lot and want more chapters
Spirit of silence
Fantasy · Robert_Mosu_4955