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anyone know if theyre gonna pick it back up or is it dead?
ch 530 Chapter 65 The Rise (7)
Abyss Domination
Games · Eminent Student Of Buddha
the grammar is good but the speech seems awkward if she's vulgar she should speak informally like "bro" or saying "don't go falling for your sis now, you creep". Could be a minor imprivement imo but the story seems nice. [img=recommend]
"Huh! Tris, I know you very well. The moment you were released you were planning on ghosting me, weren't you?! I will not let that happen, you are coming with me."
Blood Elf Monarch
Fantasy · Avan
i did a bit of napkin math and if the experience curve maintains iits exponential increase based on level differential he only need to kill someone about 9 levels higher to get to level 100. With a max skilled ability as long as he doesn't face some lightning resistant it shouldn't be too hard unless the hp growth is also exponential which based on the current scaling shouldnt be too hard.
50 damage per cast was amazing at the Amateur stage if Darius was to use himself as a gauge. He currently had 150 HP even with 15 Strength and 10 Endurance, meaning that should a clone of him appear, he could be killed in three casts!
Darius Supreme
Fantasy · Kotario
why does she say "masta" constantly i mean even a little girl can say master i don't know why but it really peeves me. am i the obly one?
『Masta just have to think of 'START' then the roulette can spin, also Lily can do it for Masta.』
ZeroFive
Fantasy · IamNoob
Evolving them with the intention of creating followers gives them a base 'loyalty' he needs to expand it through helping them develop or other means to gain true faith. His main goal right now can be considered creating a civilization and helping them do so and expanding their world view as he increases their reasoning and potential along with his great power makes them see him as their deity.
ch 0 6 Chapter 6
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101
Hope you give the novel a try and give me more feedback though! I appreciate reading my readers' thoughts on my novel.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101
brainwashing for sure as for the instant romance not really. i wouldnt want such a stale relationship in my novel she sees him as a divine being thus cant fathom any romance between the two atm. He needs to build a relationship and make her see herself as his companion not a servant and this takes time.and effort even more when he gets so easily immersed in his projects and using his powers.
ch 0 2 Chapter 2
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101
Hey
ch 10 Chapter 10 Algar
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101
Thanks i apreciate the support! :D
ch 12 Chapter 12 Algar
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101
Didn't mean for it to sound combative if it did. I do appreciate the feedback!
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101
He doesn't really hide his power. He just can't go full on fight the other god at the moment since they have the support they have. The other gods are just as powerful as he is but they have a millions of followers so it would make it difficult for him to face them head on. Not to mention they are many and he is an equal in a one on one. He first shows his power on chapter 6 by cursing a race if you read that far. Now onto the true power comment. Two people with great power fight the one who has ants distracting him will most likely lose. Either way I hope you give my novel a chance since I feel like it is a pretty fun read, but if you don't enjoy this type of novel then that's cool too. We all have stuff we like and dislike.
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
The last Daimon of Primus Planan
Fantasy · rafa101
Isn't this just Lord Of The People: I Recruited A Mutant Succubus From The Start ? I'm pretty sure this is just a copy of a half translated novel
Misty World: Start with SSS skill
Fantasy · HikaruKiki