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Bro am actually thinking of something with them, it is kinda sad to leave them like that xD
ch 0 2 Prologue: Unlucky Vampire II
Fantasy · ScreamingSoul
Elena von Fargas - (4th Summon, Oni)
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Limu von Fargas - (1st Summon, Slime)
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Limu von Fargas - (1st Summon, Slime)
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Limu von Fargas - (1st Summon, Slime)
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Meru von Fargas - (3rd Summon, Octopus)
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Zaforia von Fargas - Demon Empress.
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Full Form
Lisha von Fargas - (2nd Summon, Kitsune)
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Lisha von Fargas - (2nd Summon, Kitsune)
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FMC
Zaforia von Fargas - Demon Empress.
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4th Sister
Elena von Fargas - (4th Summon, Oni)
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Full Form
Meru von Fargas - (3rd Summon, Octopus)
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3rd Sister
Meru von Fargas - (3rd Summon, Octopus)
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Eldest Sister
Limu von Fargas - (1st Summon, Slime)
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MC
Alastor von Fargas (Daniel Evans) - (5th Summon, Vampire)
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Book has a nice concept and well defined characters, although I believe it begins in a rather confusing way since names of characters and actions are thrown out like it is a second season instead of the first, it is rather easy to understand afterwards. My only advice would be to be careful with commas, paragraph length and also the usage of uppercase.