Webnovel Author: ReLion - Novel&Fanfic Collection

Sorry but I must give u such a low score, the reason is because I think u have a great idea about hacker system in a world like cyberpunk where anything is connected but ur execution suck as hell1. ur story is super fast sometimes I don't know what's going on2. the system is too OP not that's a bad thing if u can make it a comedy, cause what I think about this system genre is the system can't be too OP so the story have something to progress OR make it a comedy one3.ur character design is bad, I mean look at the interaction between MC and Lucy when they first meet at the train, even though MC know Lucy want to steal from him he still ask Lucy what this girl doin as a question not a statement then they go stealing others together and he also consider to trust this thieve even though he meet her no more than 5 hours ago and she do the same. 4. in terms of world building I can't say anything cause it's just cyberpunk not something u create but I know u just watch the anime without looking at the game reference, and for me who knows cyberpunk from game I'm kinda dissapointed. 5. and last about a system u create in this novel is too much, it's because the system u create sometimes giving te MC power without taking anything back like when he strip a ripper doc clean and he thought "how the hell I move all these items back" and he got inventory without price, without quest whatsoever and that's happen more than 1 time. I hope my comment will make u step up ur novel cause I really like the story

y'a know his teammates is too useless against MoG