Please tell me it is Adam x Ur or Adam x Ur x Lilia. That would be spectacular.
ch 59 Chapter 59 - Report.
Anime & Comics · CORNBRINGER
Excalibur: the last phantasm Enkidu: the chains of heaven and the black barrel. if I'm not wrong
A holy sword forged from the inner sea of the world. Chains forming a spear that awoke the breath of the stars. A barrel that measured life and inflicted death.
Anime & Comics · Feniurme
he is going to madara them isnt he?!!! :)
ch 58 Chapter 58: Elemental Affinity
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
yes please
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beautiful!!! I want Moar!!!
ch 0 2 Chapter - 2: How The Paths Work
Anime & Comics · ARealInsomniac
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(both -->) jk, don't you dare vote for this ;))
Movies · TC_Liyanage1
axel seems to be the kind of guy to remember that rose threatened him to come to that compartment in a previous chapter. please make him hold a grudge and not trust her. . one scenario can be like this. axel doesn't trust rose and wants nothing to do with her but her threat is in the front of his mind and he forces himself to be nice to her. this niceness ends up making rose get a crush on him but axel just keeps on hating her even more. he wants nothing to do anything with her and her friends. this keeps happening until it boils over and explodes in a shouting match. axel leaves satisfied and rose heartbroken. this also makes him an enemy of the black except andromeda who is trying to help him he doesn't believe her.
ch 16 Chapter 16: A Challenge
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
the obito uchiha intangibility. I like it. pls do it
ch 36 Is it wrong to get fed up with life?
Anime & Comics · HappyVainGlory
why would he have to answer beyond the basics? he would be under no obligations to give them his life story or tell them his secrets. all other fics just have their mc tell ozpin and glynda their secrets, I hope you do something different. after answering some basic questions there is no need for him to tell them any more and he should have no need to explain his semblance. It doesnt matter that they want to know, he has a right to privacy and is under no obligation to tell two strangers about his powers
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Ruby Rose (3)
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
why would he have to answer beyond the basics? he would be under no obligations to give them his life story or tell them his secrets. all other fics just tell ozpin and glynda their secrets, I hope you do something different. it doesn't matter that they want to know, he has a right to his privacy and semblances originate from the soul, I doubt the people of remnant would go out and tell other people their's, so there is no reason for him to explain his
Albus sighs at this knowing he's going to have to explain some things about himself and answer some questions.
Anime & Comics · Jovami6729
Mera and Karen please
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Anime & Comics · VQuintessence
one last thing. when jaune goes to another world, please don't have the other worlds freeze in time. if the time passes when he comes back new developments might occur at this way would be interesting. so yeah... no time freezing upon dimension traveling
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in many other fics jaunes parents are stricter on him than on his sisters. if you want you can use this angle to build resentment between him and his parents after they refuse to train him. focus more on the wider world of remnant and not on the main cast in beacon add some world building. a character like your jaune has no need to go to beacon, he can save people on his own by just traveling.no need to train other's and give them powers and pls remove that time dilation thing. it removed all the stakes in the story. no need to make him ridiculously powerful and give him all manners of abilities. powers take time to train so you might want to give him a certain type of powers and stick with them. in this fic you gave him the bleeding edge iron man suit. but I dont think he even used it before combining it with the destroyer. if your gatch gives him something, try to have him you it. good luck on the rewrite I will read it when it comes out.
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nick can probably adopt bell as his daughter. would be interesting dynamic between nick, Morgan and bell
ch 0 3 Chapter - 3: Danmachi & WHAT!?
Anime & Comics · PlaneswalkerGodZen
I know right! it happens un all the fanfics, they always head to the ORC to meet the devils, even in fics where they don't like them. Why is it never like "I ain't moving from NY place to meet someone, if she wants to meet me she can come here!"
And when the classes did the blonde knight of Rias told him that his King wanted to see him.
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Anime & Comics · Dragon15681