Hi! This is Aarnaa. I am a curious reader and an aspiring author looking read and write some unique stories. I am a university student and a content writer as well. Lots of love for the community! ^_^
2019-11-28 Joined India
Obviously what exactly happened is yet to be revealed but it's getting quite exciting!
Among the mourning visitors at the funeral, nobody noticed the slender figure of a woman draped in a white shawl, covering most of her face, who just stood at one corner, staring blankly at the caskets being lowered to the ground.
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
*Mrs Roy - in case she is the wife. The imagery is far better in this chapter
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Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
So much going on! No one is leading a normal life - pretty realistic though!
ch 0 4 Choking Embrace
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
Use smaller sentences for better clarity and readability
She gained consciousness sitting in a cab, with a shawl drawn over her. The cab driver was relieved to see her awake and suddenly asked her if she was okey, and kind of blatantly asked her if the old guy was someone she knew. Although a bit dazed, she remembered the incident, and read the situation, and quickly defused the misunderstanding. The old guy, who was sitting beside her quietly until now, gave her a kind smile. She noticed that he was dressed very formally, in what looked like office clothes, and in general gave off a very important individual aura.
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
Going pretty well! Looking forward to it!
ch 0 4 Choking Embrace
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
Always check preview for these lines...also little tip...just a small one would do
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Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
You need a "yet" before he was not bothered! How does someone suffice with two pieces of bread? ~_~
Even though the school was pretty new, the lack of maintenance made it hard to realize that the building was only 6 years old. Anirudh strolled down the passage, passing by the classrooms bustling with overenthusiastic children screaming and jumping, although he didn't seem to be annoyed by the noise. As much as he hated the unnecessary noise, he was not bothered by the small children jumping, running, playing with each other. He sat down on a slab against the disfigured pillar, and focused on the two slices of bread he was holding. His mother had asked him to carry something more to eat, but he would mostly ignore her requests.
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
can't vote on auxiliary chapters
ch 0 -1 Blood Smiles
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
Are these meant to be auxiliary chapters ?
ch 0 -2 The Sky Shatters
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes
Appreciate your kind words ^_^
ch 11 A Chilling Night (Part 1)
Urban · Aarnaa
You definitely forgot the plot didn't you? Suru and Sharmishtha are different people
ch 21 Mr & Mrs Roychowdhury
Urban · Aarnaa
The physical appearances are very well written... this is only the first chapter I would like to explore the plot more[img=recommend]
ch 0 1 Anna... The Alpha Of The Pack
Fantasy · ranmaro
Would that be bad? (~ ̄▽ ̄)~?
ch 16 Death Is All Around Us
Urban · Aarnaa
(~ ̄▽ ̄)~
ch 15 Four Black Roses
Urban · Aarnaa
I am happy that you feel engaged with the story...stay tuned ^_^
ch 11 A Chilling Night (Part 1)
Urban · Aarnaa
The best thing I like about this story is that the Author doesn't portray Han Yufan as a really good and silly 'sheep' who is under a bad influence but rather a clever man who is trying gain advantage of Tangning with deceit.
ch 19 Let's Get Married Immediately
Urban · Passion Honey
Sorry I couldn't come with better descriptions 😅
ch 14 The Horror Show
Urban · Aarnaa
Going great so far! Looking forward to the new chapter!
ch 0 5 Tears on a Grave of Thorns
Black Are The Tears That Bleed
Fantasy · Il_Dottore_writes