Webnovel Author: Tsetth - Novel Collection

He gets skinner in later chaps...

Think of it as 'Arrrgh', like when you're using all your strength to lift a heavy object...

Yup, his mother is Hemera goddess of light, but this relates to a separate system of power that doesn't influence his Innate Dharma/Immortal cultivation...

Know I wasn't trying to be condescending by suggesting looking at the situation as a whole. I suppose I suggested it so you add that perspective to your suspension of disbelief...

It's hard to change a reader's mind once they've already have a perception of what the book is going to be about, but its definitely not going to have plot or characters interacting like that. Oh, I guess you could read the top comment in this chap and a few others ones to get what I'm saying...anyway if you decided to continue do leave a commit if your opinonin's changed...

Oh, then did you finish the chapter? If you think this is going to be a common theme for the mc then it isnt, given the circumstances of the situation, Sol was still in denial that his father couldn't protect his home, and you could say his words just now was said out of anger because his father told him to run away, something that went against the many lessons that his father always taught him. I know his words said here sounds like something those self rightious mcs would say, but if you zoom out and consider the situation from a wider perspective you might have deffering opinion. I know the type of mc's you're thinking about, but if you continue reading I think you'll prob trust me not to create those types situations for the mc or force him into a situation just for plot...

lol, did you rly

Haha, I suppose that's what I was going for, for readers and Sol to share the same feeling of having their expectations dashed...

in person*

disciple*

Yup, but most readers aren't gonna commit this to memory even if they were distinct names since this is just a backstory info dump. The names will only get familiar when they're brought up in memorable moments later on in the book... well this is what i feel after reading and writing books...

Yup, it'll eventually be explained in later chaps thou...

Nah bro, just differing opinion is all...

I think it was alright, given the mood i was trying to set going forward...

I thought of this before writing it, and I decided to still keep this scene as it could be explained that the child thought that was just the smell of the paint. Paint itself has strong smell as well, and the child wouldn't be able to distinguish it from blood.

Through context Im sure one could tell that something is wrong with Sol's birth that caused his age not matching his looks, and if one is really reading into the context of the convos surrounding this topic, one would realized that Sol was must have been in something like an incubation period during those decades after his father brough him to the village... I left hints of this, and thats the fact everyone is treating him like a child including his Father even when they are alone, even Sol himself thought he was ten, those decades don't count into his maturity since he wasn't even conscious of the world yet as he was still just a baby in incubation... as for why he was in incubation thats explained in future chapters....