obviously he's different he has an adult mind while naruto and sasuke have a child mentailtiy I don't how u can compare them and the call them stupid where one is adult who lived in good society while naruto and sasuke experienced traumatic experienced at a young age, I love the story and the plot just get annoyed when the author always states that he's not stupid as an child well obviously
ch 23 Consciousness
Action · AkitoTakahashi
hopefully u continue with this, enjoyed so far
I just believ the chapterr was rushed, I'm enjoying it so far but he still Should check the details of the contract, he was still in his mid twenties and should now how these types of companies behave depending on his previous music career from his past life, from my perspective u should at least make more detailed then rushing the chapter, my guy met the the women for less then 30min and straight away just gave his life away to to company, I know that this is my opnion but just giving parts u can improve on. just try not to rush the important details of the story
ch 13 Visit(4)
Realistic · ForeignSign
no suppport, or resources, my guy is hallunicating
ch 14 The Worldly Situation
Eastern · Back to the Beginning
Auhtor when will you continue this story/Novel You have some fans waiting as an author no matter how many people read it still means someone is enjoying your novel even though theres only 1 chapter it can show potential
ch 0 1 Chapter 1:- System ? Huh?
Sports · CultivatorReader
what the he'll is the titles they have no correlation to the chapters at all
ch 12 Stock Rising
Sports · Konkey_Dong
please Dont let the Carol be the love interest if your going to go with story it's to basic and I don't think they will be a good match, I'm just saying my opinion and this might not be wants going to happen at all I don't know I'm just giving a suggestion. but so far I have liked the series and hope u can continue
ch 48 Chapter 58
Realistic · Soulless_King
1st one I don'tike to much and I like both soa and solo leveling option as an fellow writer but I feel like solo leveling will get more attention and the small plot idea is Good for me. So I'm Going for solo leveling but I don't mind soa aswell just my opinion nerf the Abilities a little for both since the characters can go super op really qucikly and for my that genre just ruins the story for me and the plot so that it.
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Anime & Comics · LazyTanaka
so it probably will be similar but if u read the synopsis it's there
A great plot ans story enjoying Lot just couple thing that the author does with the main character which annoys me everything. Is comparing himself to naruto and sauke calling then stupid. obviously he's different he has an adult mind while naruto and sasuke have a child mentailtiy I don't how u can compare them and the call them stupid where one is adult who lived in good society while naruto and sasuke experienced traumatic experienced at a young age, I love the story and the plot just get annoyed when the author always states that he's not stupid as an child well obviously
We're Sorry
Action · AkitoTakahashi