Webnovel Author: Kenwood_Jones

Kenwood_Jones

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What happened to jiraiya and Orochimaru

ch 23 Naruto : Uchiha : Chapter 23

Naruto : Uchiha Clan

Anime & Comics · sybife

Kenwood_Jones

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Great writing good direction for the story Great harem development good pace This is a great read

Naruto - Minato Namikaze SI

Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague

Kenwood_Jones

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Goated.

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Kenwood_Jones

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Pls review

In Naruto with Devil fruits

Anime & Comics · Kenwood_Jones

Kenwood_Jones

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Mc

ch 0 1 Chapter 1

In Naruto with Devil fruits

Anime & Comics · Kenwood_Jones

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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Sakura, Sarada, Hinata,Ino

Who should be in the harem.

我想要

Anime & Comics · Spabsta

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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Thank for chapter

ch 90 Takedown Of Second Year's [1]

Conquering The Novel

Fantasy · Enigma0

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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+1

Gloria [Yes I know wincest, but I am motherfucking GhostyZ what you expect? Every girl is fair game]

Cyberpunk Edgerunners: Hacker System

Anime & Comics · DarkGamerZ

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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Great read H bbbb.

I Started As A Novel Villain

Urban · Nakahara1

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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Yes keep pos ting

ch 195 (Questions)

I Started As A Novel Villain

Urban · Nakahara1

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 0 1 A Hundred Years of Pregnancy, The Descent of a Divine Miracle!

Reincarnated As A Baby? My Cry Is A Dragon Roar!

Eastern · Northern Wind Sword

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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Rias(#StoptheRiashate)

ch 0 6 chapter 5 plans for the future

(Dropped) Becoming Aizen in High school Dxd

Others · susuke_uchiwa

Kenwood_Jones

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Wouldn ’t care

ch 40 Alex’s masterplan 2: Electric Boogaloo

When I woke up, I was in an Eroge World!

Fantasy · The_POZ

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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W is as about king dom as r

I didn't falter as he questioned me, nor as I replied. "I am the firstborn of your second born, Regulus Arcturus Black, the lost son of the House of Black, now found." I blinked, why had I just said that… it was like something was telling me it was the correct thing to say.

Harry Potter: Lost Son

Book&Literature · PsyChotiX556

Kenwood_Jones

1yr

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To fix the pacing of the story you will have to introduce more characters from other noble house also visit them. Also you need a vilian. Some issues with your proganist is that he is growing physically but not mentally. Also you have you have to give more foreshadowing of the main protagonists of the eroge. Also you need a foundation building time skip were he tries to gain foot hold in this new word.Also I see your not trying to make home to overpowered so you nerfing him.To fixed this give him potential skill which alone help build him into the character you want him to be. I enjoyed reading 👍👍👍