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I'm just your average weirdo. Nothing special to brag about .

2020-09-07 Joined Kenya

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Your writing is exceptional well groomed.

I could feel the panic slowly building up inside of me, threatening to burst forth and overwhelm in a moment's time, but in the brief respite before the terror set in me, I was still in a state of shock and adrenaline that allowed me to stay in a hyper-conscious. I could hear a car come to a stop outside the building which meant I would have company soon.

The League of Nightmares

The League of Nightmares

Horror&Thriller · ThePotatoKing

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They let weaklings use them - not used. Change that please.
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The Final Act

The Final Act

Fantasy Romance · Saeven07

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There are no creatures more wicked than humans. Truly we are a havoc to deal with.
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The Final Act

The Final Act

Fantasy Romance · Saeven07

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A wise decision to side track the idea. Clever creature they are.
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The Final Act

The Final Act

Fantasy Romance · Saeven07

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Although most authors and educationally advanced ones ,might understand the paragraph, other who don't have this qualifications can not understand it. A book should be in an intermediate level to allow readers to follow through.
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The Final Act

The Final Act

Fantasy Romance · Saeven07

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Well hell, you now have my attention.

Tradition was what started peace long ago. But it was also the reason why war began against beings- vampires versus themselves, versus humans, and then witches; and finally, magic against mortals.

The Final Act

The Final Act

Fantasy Romance · Saeven07

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Thank you for pointing that out.

Now came a series of a worried Chris.Not even his daily does of alcohol or women would calm his wits down.Not only was he stress by the threat of destruction that was heading their pack's way but also about Helix's recent behaviour. Helix had shamelessly ignored all of his duties. All he did was drink whiskey and sit next to the boy. And honestly, Chris held zero hope that the boy would survive.The chances of a human surviving the bite was second to none.Even were-dire wolves would die. Thirteen men and women had after all died trying to be his beta.That too they were were-dire wolves. And by his I mean Chris' dear readers.

Son's of pride

Son's of pride

Fantasy · Dare43564

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The na reminds me of the nollywood movies i watched as a child
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Where did they come from and what where the guards doing.
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