See this! I just gifted the story: Luxury car
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: Little Lingxu Peak
Eastern · March of the Groping Fish
sry but my editing don't work on phone... try to fix that later
ch 792 King of Immortal Mountain (Final)
Eastern · Diabolical Eggplant
I have a theory.author : diabolic eggplant with just one book. eggplant : "They looked like goose or chicken eggs, which led to the name “eggplant." maybe "diabolic easter egg"Title : "Museum of..." : Museum is for conservation of data (futur)1st chapter : "Lin Jin slapped Xiao Huo on the head.Just then, Lin Jin felt pain as if a lightning bolt exploded in his brain, crackling loudly. In an instant, a radiant light shone from his head. In the midst of Lin Jin’s astonishment, he hears a chorus of roars and howls of a thousand beasts, drumming in his ears, followed by the melody of cries and chirps of bugs and birds, lightly strumming his heartstrings.A light flashed before him, the clouds dispersed and a white jade hall appeared with a stone tablet at the entrance that read ‘Museum of Deadly Beasts’ : Stone tablet at the first chapter and it was the action of slapping xiao huo who triggered the museum...1st chapter too : Status: "Heavily injured with three hidden injuries which are..." "Lin Jin had no idea how this guy managed to stay alive until now"Curator : we think about museum but can have other definition like "tutor for disabled person" (like when an apocalist come)Daojun : can be like "the dao" (equal) (not sure, read on internet dictionary)We can think of an immortals who try to solve the problem and think he is strong enoughLinjin : can be like "present choice" (not sure) like no more immortals can solve that, give that to a beast.Chapter 436 : Lin jin see the dao mask who is near the same and lin jin really look identical to Daojun in his opinion.I dont find where but i remember that he try to remember something and can't do it.There is some similarity with the disciple of daojun and the actual person in the visitation hall too (too late for search).At the final chapter " Young friend is use at the end and when he comeback from 7 years on the land for searching stone".We learn that the mortal layer is forbidden for immortals too.The ennemy fused with the saint, we learn stone can do that. We learn that with equilibrium it's ok.So my theory is that the immortal emperor was a cunning man and fused with a rank 8 beast voluntary or not and achieved rank 9. He lose sanity and aim just at immortals by instinct. He is equally strong at the law of heavens and he is an abomination know as the immortal devouring beast.Lin jin transmigrated (no mention saying dying) two times. He lose on daojun but win on lin jin (last sentence in real world) with Xao Huo who is certainly part of transmigation too or time travel.The last sentence is for lin jin who don't know if it was real or not.So lin jin is probably in the mortal layer many years later. Beast and immortals are certainly in the other layers now (he love to be a mortal, love the heavens). He saved the world and they want to let him know.He can't stay, or we can say that there is no more dialog because the museum comeback to the stone (He think about that near the beginning "maybe the museum can be retake" or something like that). And the only one who survive to that is the saint with a body cultivate since a very very very long time.
ch 792 King of Immortal Mountain (Final)
Eastern · Diabolical Eggplant
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 0 1 Chapter 0001. Legendary Class: Dulwak's Heir
Games · DreamThree
The "too much luck" is present since the beginning...
ch 411 The Golden Mummy
Games · XiaoKongxu
same note for me :D
ch 410 The Answer is not Enough
Games · XiaoKongxu
Not read. I am bad at grammar etc. because english is not my language but please use punctuation a little more.
ch 400 Possible Effect of Pandemonium
Games · XiaoKongxu
Tl;dr : overall i like it. The beginning is good but too long. Some part in the middle are not well done and boring but other part are near perfect. The universe is well built but some part are inconsistant or missing imo (partly for futur project ?), the end is completly rushed. The author is really good for writing some "sad part" of his story but more "epic situation" are needed. Teasing for futur event is too much (like "this decision may change the rest of all living being") and i think the author forgot some. Author need to better think on the balance of the story, and write the storyboard at the beginning. (Spoiler : "adopted baby", Ark with the monarch "ok good luck, we leave, bb", the end complelty rushed. You can't do that man) BUT for a first novel it's a really good start with lot of thing to improve.
God´s Eyes
Urban · HideousGrain