thanks I'll fix it when I'm not being lazy
The realm of death was entirely gray, the food tasted disgusting, the only good thing about is that both the men and women here are born extremely attractive, witch is why besides killing the most fun things to do where have sex and gamble.
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Yea, that's what I was going for
I appreciate you reading my novel or whatever it is. But do you say anything else besides "Thanks for the chapter"? I'm genuinely curious, mainly because I would love some constructive criticism to help me write it better
ch 13 Chapter 12: So Big!
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Thanks for reading
ch 12 Chapter 11: Dreams
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thanks for reading
ch 11 Chapter 10: A Fun Carriage Ride
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Thanks for reading
ch 10 Chapter 9: Again!?
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She does but I don't know how clear I was describing them. All of her methods require death energy to cultivate so she can't cultivate them without any death energy
ch 0 7 Chapter 6: The misfortune Begins
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Thanks for reading
ch 0 9 Chapter 8: Escape!?
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Thanks for reading
ch 0 8 Chapter 7: Young Master Fang Liu
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Thanks for reading
ch 0 6 Chapter 5: They're Here!?
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Naw man thnsk for rdsuf tme
ch 0 5 Chapter 4: Bandits?
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Thanks, I'll try my best but I've been really lazy lately, sooo idk but you'll get more eventually
The Misfortunate Goddess Of Death
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