This is a bit confusing. You reffernce a sentence up that lilly saw Dawn on His arm but not Then state after that that she saw him and that her plan worked. She had seen him already.
Lily Wyatt rose from her place upon hearing the footsteps. She looked back and her eyes narrowed when she saw that Dawn was hung over Daryn's arms. She ignored her and looked at Cole. He was looking like such a fine boy. His sharp features were prominent and she couldn't help but admire the cleft in his chin, just like her son. Then she saw Daryn with surprise. Her trap had worked well.
Fantasy · MishaK
Just wondering if the other 2 chapters where going to be released?
ch 32 Treat You Like Glass
Gears (Book 1 Savage Creed MC)
Urban · Allison Kayne