Dosilli

Dosilli

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A different perspective

2020-01-03 Joined United States
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Dosilli
Dosilli
9 months ago
Posted

Shameless Author Reiview here. I truly think I got a good story for you all and I would love you to give it a try!

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Dosilli
Dosilli
11 months ago
Commented

Ah so it is Earth

"It seems I was right. Your manipulation of gravity acts as a sphere of influence. Anything entering that sphere experiences gravity at a level far greater than Earth's."

Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil

Inertia: Beneath the Starlit Veil

Fantasy · KenKaizen

Dosilli
Dosilli
1 years ago
Commented

cliche after cliche

This sealed the deal for Alex, just for being there he would get a beast core. He was sure he could get more rewards as well now that his power had increased and he now had a weapon of his own.

Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

Primordial Expanse: I have the Strongest Talent!

Fantasy · TheUngod

Dosilli
Dosilli
1 years ago
Commented

why is still level 0 ? can someone explain

Dosilli
Dosilli
3 years ago
Commented

At this point i need u to have a patreon link or something so i can get more chapters

Dosilli
Dosilli
3 years ago
Commented

i need like ten chapters next release please

Dosilli
Dosilli
3 years ago
Posted

A good idea for a story, with some decent potential for long term writing but it is filled with too many holes, and the characters could use some more substance..

Dosilli
Dosilli
3 years ago
Commented

a top agent from a secret organization, revealed herself to fight, scolded her target, openly talked about her mission and organization, showed them her face and then proceeded to agree to teach him and move in? That doesn’t make any sense and is unreasonable unless this is a very weak and pitiful organization but thats not how you’ve been describing them so far…

Dosilli
Dosilli
4 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! Can’t wait for the next one

Dosilli
Dosilli
4 years ago
Commented

whats the release rate gonna be going forward? enjoying the story.