Webnovel Author: Dosilli - Novel Collection

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

At this point i need u to have a patreon link or something so i can get more chapters

ch 73 I Don't Care.

Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God

Action · Awespec

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

i need like ten chapters next release please

ch 71 Bearing Gifts

Rebirth of the Nameless Immortal God

Action · Awespec

Dosilli

2yr

Posted

A good idea for a story, with some decent potential for long term writing but it is filled with too many holes, and the characters could use some more substance..

The Last Primal

Fantasy · Shaele

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

a top agent from a secret organization, revealed herself to fight, scolded her target, openly talked about her mission and organization, showed them her face and then proceeded to agree to teach him and move in? That doesn’t make any sense and is unreasonable unless this is a very weak and pitiful organization but thats not how you’ve been describing them so far…

ch 43 Chapter 43 - Arrangement

The Last Primal

Fantasy · Shaele

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

Thanks for the chapter! Can’t wait for the next one

ch 56 The Course

Finley- The Lost Prince

Fantasy · Haven Custos

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

whats the release rate gonna be going forward? enjoying the story.

ch 226 Fenriri Wants To Save Food

I Am A Notorious Hidden Boss In The Alternate World

Urban · Pointbreak

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

Really good concept, and writing ability, but there’s nothing to keep the reader hooked long term, and the mc acts too much like a child given that he’s a former assassin which doesn’t make sense. Droping for now 😪

ch 0 9 Chapter 8 - Exhausted

Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World

Fantasy · Aimdaqs

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

thanks for da chap

ch 54 Suspicions

Finley- The Lost Prince

Fantasy · Haven Custos

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

thanks for the chapter...kindly requesting the next one..

ch 53 The Sealing

Finley- The Lost Prince

Fantasy · Haven Custos

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

finally!!

ch 51 Follow me

Finley- The Lost Prince

Fantasy · Haven Custos

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

Appreciate the chapter, looking forward to the next one

ch 49 Cornered

Finley- The Lost Prince

Fantasy · Haven Custos

Dosilli

2yr

Commented

thanks for the chapter

ch 47 Grounded

Finley- The Lost Prince

Fantasy · Haven Custos

Dosilli

3yr

Commented

Almost thought this was dropped. Awaiting the next chapter!

ch 40 Act

Finley- The Lost Prince

Fantasy · Haven Custos

Dosilli

3yr

Replied to Chuklz70

Hmm I’ll consider it, but for now I’m happy with the current system. I appreciate the suggestion though.

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Fantasy · Dosilli

Dosilli

3yr

Replied to Chuklz70

Remember the comprehension skill that Jaba has gives him knowledge regarding a lot of things. He was always aware of the passing of days, but he still doesn’t know the exact time of day and he’s not even aware of it!

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Fantasy · Dosilli

Dosilli

3yr

Replied to Chuklz70

Nun of that r*pe stuff. But I’ll tryto be unique as much as possible in a goblin isekai novel.

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Fantasy · Dosilli

Dosilli

3yr

Replied to Chuklz70

First of all thanks for reading, and even taking the time out to comment on it! I appreciate it. To respond to your comments though, this is my very first real attempt at writing anything and you'll find a lot of hiccups along the way. I think the later chapter are a lot better in terms of quality. Thanks again for reading and providing your opinions!