Webnovel Author: Darktea9876 - Novel Collection

The story harbored a promising premise, but fell short of its potential. While the concept was intriguing, the execution lacked depth across various elements such as character development, kingdom building, and pacing. Although the main character showed promise, the supporting cast remained superficial. Similarly, while glimpses of a well-built kingdom were evident, overall depth was lacking. The storyline felt rushed, denying readers the chance to fully immerse themselves in the plot's intricacies. As the narrative progressed, the initial intrigue waned, leading to a gradual decline in engagement. Overall, while the book had potential, it ultimately failed to live up to it.

This book offers a surprisingly good quality of translation, which is a rarity in the genre. While the main character starts off weak and inexperienced, his growth journey, aided by his system, is compelling. The plot is intriguing, although it leaves much of the evil elements unexplained, adding to their mysterious allure as ghosts and supernatural entities. Personally, I find this ambiguity appealing and am eager to delve deeper into the story. Despite encountering some editing mistakes, particularly earlier on, they have been rectified by chapter 400. This novel is vastly underrated, with numerous unexplored facets that keep readers intrigued. Witnessing the protagonist evolve into a formidable cultivator is gratifying; his transformation is believable and well-executed. Overall, I thoroughly enjoy every aspect of this novel and highly recommend it for its quality storytelling.

The novel presents several recurring issues, among which I'll highlight the most significant ones. Firstly, the cultivation levels of the story often become confusing, especially when characters are referred to by multiple names. This can make it feel like reading a MTL novel, leading to moments of disorientation and difficulty in understanding the narrative. Although the introductory chapters were a positive addition, they didn't sufficiently anchor the reader, resulting in a struggle to recall key elements later on. Implementing character panels more frequently or clearer labeling of stages could alleviate this confusion. Secondly, the characters lack depth and development, detracting from the overall engagement with the story. Thirdly, as the plot progresses, it tends to lean towards a repetitive pattern of 'face-slapping' encounters, where the protagonist swiftly moves from one adversary to the next. This pacing feels incongruent with the longevity-focused narrative and could benefit from a more nuanced approach. Moving forward, the narrative's foundation on longevity presents an intriguing premise, yet fails to fully explore its potential. Instead of leveraging the protagonist's advantage of time for in-depth character development and strategic plot arcs, the story rushes through events, neglecting the opportunity for deeper world-building and exploration. Rather than delving into the intricacies of kingdom-building and the protagonist's unique advantage, the narrative gravitates towards a repetitive cycle of confrontations, diminishing the story's overall impact. This lack of depth and missed opportunity to capitalize on the central theme results in a feeling of unfulfilled potential. In conclusion, while the book isn't devoid of merits, it ultimately falls short of leaving a lasting impression. While it may serve as a passable diversion, it lacks the depth and allure to warrant a return for further reading. It can be regarded as a mediocre offering, suitable for fleeting entertainment but unlikely to resonate deeply with readers.

it feels more like MTL than an original work.there are many parts that are not translated or changed in the story.I could only read the first 20 character before dropping It. it needs an overall edit.

Top tier Providence was much better than this one. this one was like many mediocre novel in this type of story.it's not annoying but it's not enjoyable, you will read It because you don't have a better book to read.

it's locked too early chapter 15.MC has a simulator but he always is being surprised.the main point of simulation is to know everything before it happens.just some lame stories it's not worth to pay for it.

This story is overwhelmingly dull, lacking any meaningful character development or immersive world-building. The narrative progresses in a tedious straight line, leaving the reader feeling like their time is being wasted. I cannot recommend it.

very bad translation.there is not much difference from MTL.it's not worth reading.

At first, I thought it'd be like those astral pet store and other store-type system books, but it was just a trashy face-slapping story. Honestly, don't bother reading it. Total waste of time.

At first, the book was intriguing, with a compelling storyline and strong adversaries. However, as the plot progressed, the repetitive cycle of the protagonist constantly facing new enemies became tiresome. What initially captivated me eventually became a tedious pattern, diminishing the overall enjoyment of the story. Ultimately, while the book had its moments, it ultimately fell short of being exceptional, settling instead for a mediocre narrative.

This book delves into the life of a character navigating a dark world while under immense pressure. As the character gains power, he uncover an even darker side to the world, leading him to adopt a darker persona, albeit with seemingly noble justifications. The narrative explores the interplay between the dark setting, the allure of power, and the protagonist's journey. However, the story falls short due to questionable reasons behind various plot developments, feeling more like forced storytelling at times. Despite persisting through 350 chapters, the increasing annoyance eventually led me to abandon it. I cannot recommend it unless you're truly desperate for reading material.

one of the worst books I ever read. the whole story is being pushed forward by the author.

very good nevel.with good world building and power system.first 100 chapter are very good after that chapter are mtl and it will be hard to follow. I liked this novel and wanted to continue but couldn't with the mtl. its's very annoying.and it's not good mtl I had read some mtl and some had good mtl but this one is very bad mtl.i give 5 for first 100 chapter and 1 for rest so i put 3 for rating for this novel.i hope someone latter edit this novel.

although the title is very lame and in first glance you can think it's some lame novel but after I read the book I kinda like it , it was not a perfect story but it was enough for me to enjoyed reading it and later go to MTL website and read the raw now that I posting this comment I read about 600 chapter's in the MTL , I can say it was enjoyable story , MC is not retard and he use hi head. so I think this story deserves more attention from people in the end , I just want to say if you don't have a very good books to read you can try this book

in first 40 Ch , especially 15-40 in tournament MC is too childish. MC is 45 year old , those joke is so lame that it makes me annoyed. does Mc personality become more mature in following chapter? because if not I will drop the story , not my type.

just 8 chapter published. with a 1 Ch/weak update. when it reach 30/40 I will take look. it's not worth it now.

Right about chapter 250 the writing falls apart - author forgets he killed people off and they come back, randomly one of the MC’s friends shows up with a completely different personality and the MC has never met him before? The MC’s personality changes….new ghost writer or something. Disappointing because the story was good before now all I can say is AVOID.

Many of the problems MC has in book is because he doesn't kill his enemy and it's annoying. Untill Ch 210 he doesn't killed even a single person. Power system in the book is rubbish. Deference between strong and weak is a single rank 3 to 4 or 4 to 5. In short this story is a poor copy of library of heaven path and Astral Pet Store.