Apologies but it is how I'm currently writing right now if you dislike it then please read something else. I thank you for the feedback, but I'm currently not going to change the entire fanfic. Thanks for reading!
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Read more of the fanfic, and you'll get what your looking for. Aizen is and will always be a cunning genius but I'm trying to add more to his character in a way so the story is more interesting. Thanks for reading!
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He's already took steps into manipulating people however It will be a while till anything "Dark" happens. Thanks for Reading!
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Didn't know that thanks, However I've already been using it so I wanna keep chapters consistent. Thanks for reading!
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Why? Just for my curiosity? Thanks for reading!
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Lol thanks big help.
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Nah your fine, I take criticism as a way to improve my writing of the characters, and the world around them.
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He's in an unknown world right now with no knowledge of what's normal or accepted. He's laying low till he gets needed info. Thanks for reading!
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Thanks for the advice it will certainly help. Thanks for reading!
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Thanks for reading!
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The rankings are like 17th - 13th because 17th seat would be the in-between for Hunter/Huntress in training and a Graduated Hunter/Huntress so it's the peak of one rank and the weakest of another rank. I hope that is understandable. Thanks for reading!
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Lol thanks just fixed it was so busy reading it I forgot to correct the miss spellings. Thanks for reading!
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Ya I do as well. Next chapter coming out later tonight.
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Thanks for the suggestion but I think currently I'm gonna keep the story in the realm of RWBY characters and there world but who knows I might get inspired to make drastic changes. Also Aizen will open up and change for the better throughout the story.
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and Thanks for reading!
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Sorry what is 'silence OPHIS' if I know what it is I could add in future chapters perhaps if it fits in the story.
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Ya I just don't see Aizen as Jaune Arc plus I have plans for Jaune in future chapters. Thanks for the info thought it will be helpful.
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Something along those lines can't say for certain thought. Thanks for reading.
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When trapped within the black box Aizen learned to go between each of his forms. It will be explained in the next chapter I hope that helped.
ch 0 3 Chapter #3 - The False God
Aizen The False God in RWBY
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