Awful writing quality and a bad character. He hates unconditionally for actions that the character he directs his hate to has yet to even attempt. If you want us to hate the target, give us something to hate. Robert is a child in the beginning. Why skip 10 years when you can add interactions with Robert and MC, maybe changing Roberts character instead of just ignoring him. The MC is stupidly breaking connections with a possibly formidable warrior that could be a strong ally or subordinate instead of an enemy. Making the entire baratheon family an enemy isnt a good idea.
20 years of learning about the dark side, not of being alive.
While he had confidence in his sixty years of brainwashing, why take the risk.
Star Wars: Road to Eternity
Movies · Lady_Synthetic
Feels very dull, like every other face slapping/reincarnation novel out there. “I’ll get revenge for you” or some boring shit like that. Acting completely out of character in the first confrontation. She had been bullied for years, and although I know nothing about the cultivation levels in this universe, I dont think an apparent 6 level difference is something to scoff at.
Looking for flaws?
Countess Miller watched everything like a hawk, scrutinizing her every move, finding flaws but found nothing. All her moves are precise with an air of sophistication. She didn't even look nervous at all and was calm through the whole ordeal.
Re: The Villainess Does It With Class
Fantasy · Raeven_Black
Switching from 1st to 3rd person a lot.
Nathan stared at the box in his hands and looked back at Nadia who was smiling wide.
Re: The Villainess Does It With Class
Fantasy · Raeven_Black
Saying “Undead Swordsman” is implying that the people that are having these thoughts, know that the MC is an undead.
He might have been a more brawn-over-brains guy, but being the boss and seeing all kinds of warriors has given him knowledge on such subjects. He can clearly tell that the Undead Swordsman wasn't Noxian, nor was he Ionian, and Sett can't help but be curious of where came from. Well, it didn't really matter to him. But, he had a feeling that today's fights weren't going to be so boring.
Two Lost Souls
Video Games · XanaShadow
“Translate” for your skelly boy.
He was unsure whether Aerion could defeat Khal Drogo in single combat or not without the use of magic. Meanwhile, there was nothing Khal Drogo could do in single combat against any one of his three undead knights. They would crush him with ease... but, then again, that was the craven's way out. Along with that, the victorious undead knight would be recognised as the Khal of the tribe (who could not even speak their tongue)... and not Aerion.
The Necromancer King (A Game Of Thrones)
TV · SovereignOfHeaven
Aerion sent a large group of pirates to take the walls while he continued the charge through the city. A hesitant sellsword stood in his way but Aerion slashed through him with staggering speed. He fell onto the ground, the massive slash on his chest spilling blood like a fountain as Aerion walked past his body.
The Necromancer King (A Game Of Thrones)
TV · SovereignOfHeaven
For 2 years
Before returning to Hogwarts, Tom looked into some company's that he could invest in. He has been promising to send a list to Alluk for a long time now. The problem was that his busy schedule just kept getting in the way. Also, Tom is extremely rich, so he isn't too worried about future money problems.
I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)
Movies · AlienWarlord
There are also 2 people that i have seen that have posted at least 20+ reviews together. Posting the exact same review over and over. “Evil_Jesus” and “grigrait”
Game Of Thrones: Baratheon The Schemer
TV · GNaNA