Had us in the first half, not gonna lie.
Lu Ming stroked the Original Card gently.
Divine Card Creator
Fantasy · Minus Ninety Degrees
Imma just pretend it's an alternate reality, ... with different female anatomy.
Similar to Evelyn, Aurora winces from pain as my cock tears a thin filmy membrane inside her vagina— her hymen.
The Sex Beast System (The World Of Systems)
Urban · Roeselawik
Ever seen 'Bruce Almighty'? I reckon that's what might happen. So safer than sorry?
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Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
"I'm running circles around ya'! "
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Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
Now are these high-stakes or low-stakes... ...I'll see myself to the door.
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Chrysalis
Fantasy · RinoZ
He's referring to the 150 million espers that Earth has.
"If I were Long Chuan, I won't assign the soldiers of the legion to small cities for defense. Earth has a hundred and fifty million people, tens of thousands of small cities, what's the use of scattering our small legion?"
Galactic Dark Net
Sci-fi · 9 lightyears per second
Just a quick note, not to be hounding you. But, 'They' is a collective noun, whereas the correct wording is 'Their' signifying ownership. Cheers from down under 🍻
Mars walked along with Chloe down the main street, ignoring the stares people sent after Chloe the trip was rather pleasant and soon they found a rather nice looking restaurant where they decided to have a meal while they were waiting for they meal a shady looking man walked up and asked Mars
Reincarnation of a living god
Fantasy · zad1333
And most definitely not turn around and desert youu.
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I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!
Fantasy · Sixth
Okay, first things first, I'm no author nor am I an expert but as a reader, the grammatical errors and poor sentence structure leads to me being unable to picture the scene. Even just a quick run through from a fluent English speaker would significantly help, but I feel that without those errors this story will be an interesting read. Also, I am not sure what the terminology used for this us, but stating who is the current speaker, current POV and seperating different characters' speech. For example, instead of a paragraph looking like: "And that's the plan right" "yeah, perfect" it'd probably be much easier to understand like: John anxiously questioned Bill for the nth time, "And that's the plan right?" "Yeah yeah," Bill reassured, "it's perfect." And also at the beginning of each perspective change label who is talking: -----John POV-----
APP. SEX
Urban · killersam