šøāļø Author of Flinch: Forbidden Prophecy š: āRectitudeās Dodgyā
2020-01-18 Joined Philippines
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 An ambush in the Night
Urban Ā· Nnaise
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Her novel
Fantasy Ā· Amera_Mee
Greetings! I understand that the behaviour of the FMC mightāve been an annoyance, at some point. However, I hope you will be patient enough for her character growth. Thank you very much! <33 Euphemismsofhiatus~
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Fantasy Ā· Euphemismsofhiatus
Dear Drsanders, I truly appreciate your comments. I will drop my response to all of your comments for the Capter 1 in this reply. Thus, I will have the chapter one scanned, checked and perhaps revised for improvements. I understand that the scenarios might have been confusing, and so, I will likewise work on that. As for the strange words such as āsireā and āquacksā, I might have been too carried away and baffled of which literature I was supposed to use ā which shouldāve been the American Lit rather than British Lit. Reason, why it must have turned out confusing and figurative in language. (I will be sure to work on that as well ^^) As for the grammar, thereās no denying that errors are visible. Hence, will work on that. I will have it all checked and improved (^^) You have my thanks, for your thoughtful comments and suggestions sure are boosting my will to improve this story into a better one. I hope you will continue to look forward to the upcoming chapters! <33 Euphemismsofhiatus
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Fantasy Ā· Euphemismsofhiatus
Greetings! Thank you for the input. It is mainly because I spelled it in British literature. However, I would love to have it checked as soon as I can ^^ <33
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Fantasy Ā· Euphemismsofhiatus
Greetings! Thank you so much for the comment! I have just updated a revised version of the Prologue. (Iāve altered some scenarios and dialogues, kindly check it out!) Also, I greatly apprehend your confusion. Pardon me for I was at fault ā made errors with the names and suchlike. Please look forward for the upcoming chapters, for your queries shall be answered then. <33 Euphemismsofhiatus
ch 0 1 Prologue
Fantasy Ā· Euphemismsofhiatus
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Her novel
Fantasy Ā· Amera_Mee
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 Subject 777
Fantasy Ā· GoldenStache
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 The Betrayal Of A Trusted Man
Fantasy Ā· Rana_Chim_Chim
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ch 0 1 Infatuation
Fantasy Ā· She_Myra
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 An ambush in the Night
Urban Ā· Nnaise
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 An ambush in the Night
Urban Ā· Nnaise
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 An ambush in the Night
Urban Ā· Nnaise
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 1 An ambush in the Night
Madam, Your Identities are being Exposed One by One!
Urban Ā· Nnaise