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JustS_RandomWriter
male LV 1Just a guy who loves writing stuffs, but has no courage to share his works until now XD
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Well, she got bitten, for sure. I based this off the Amazing Spider-Man 2012 (film). This is the scene after Peter, or Petra let a theft escape and he shot uncle Ben afterwards.
"I-I'm sorry, uncle Ben... It's all my fault..."
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Hope you didn't mind that Lucifer gendbend much XD
Well, I just mix comic and cinematic, so no Rogue going crazy, since I'm not too familiar with the whole situation. Just think of cinematic Carol Danvers with comic elements and my own take on her character and backstory while trying to make it not too complicated :D
ch 10 The Curious Case Of Carol Danvers
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Nah. It feels too much, so I tweaked it a little bit, as you might already read.
"Thank you, Will. For being honest," Carol murmurs, "and for not leaving me. To tell the truth, I... had no idea what to do after finding out you did the deed, and I really, really don't ever want to go through another abortion again. Thank you, really."
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Nah. Not really fall in love. More like... don't mind exploring each other? As for the number of harem, 4 is just the cap. Honestly, I prefer 2 to 3. But anything can happen in the future. But no more than 4, that is for sure.
ch 10 The Curious Case Of Carol Danvers
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Correct if I'm wrong, but Carol used the moniker Ms. Marvel first, then Kamala Khan, right?
He already knows who she is, Carol Danvers. But she does not have to know yet.
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4 is like the cap for the harem. As for the quality, I mean it is focusing more on exploring the love interests rather than making someone falls in love instantly for no reason, hence quality over quantity. Also, for the 2nd part, think about it. What kind of harem would you prefer? The 1st is one that has women who will potentially fight each other to be the alpha of the harem, or out of jealously. Or this 2nd, where the harem can keep each other accompanied and make everyone happy because they don't mind swinging "that" way. XD
ch 10 The Curious Case Of Carol Danvers
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Quality over quantity, my friend :D
ch 10 The Curious Case Of Carol Danvers
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That'll be for the future events.
ch 10 The Curious Case Of Carol Danvers
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Dude, you are one of the few who comment every chapter. It's nice to know to have readers like you XD
ch 0 9 The First Step
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Uh... what? Sorry, I'm not familiar with Warhammer, the 40K and the game one.
"Well, Oscorp agreed to let Midtown High School tour the place!" Gwen beams. "I'm gonna show my classmates and Petra where I work next week. Isn't that just exciting~?"
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Honestly, I'm working on their relationships. If I'm to write harem, I'm going to limit to 2-3 girls, while trying to make the relationships believable? As for the Carol forgetting him, I kinda stick to the comic with that part. From what I researched, when she got her power, Carol black outs and turns into Ms. Marvel whenever there is danger and does what a hero does, and she pretty much has no idea about her other personality. So yeah. Mix comic and cinematic.
ch 0 9 The First Step
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My take on Carol Danvers. Right now, she's not Captain America yet.
He already knows who she is, Carol Danvers. But she does not have to know yet.
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His suit and nanomachines will fuse with hellfire when he transforms. As for the separation like Rev-9, it won't. It just makes him stronger, that's all. As for Adam, let's just say he'll be Optimus Prime on steroid later on :D
ch 0 7 Lovely Ms. Marvel
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Right now, Ms. Marvel. Just my own take and spin of Carol Danvers. I'll try and explore her whole identity-crisis-thingy in this story. Be warned: I'm writing as someone who is only more familiar in the cinematic verse than the comic.
"Hi, Will. When I'm not Ms. Marvel, I'm known as Carol Danvers. Nice to meet you."
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Suit on hellfire? Of course it's gonna transform when he transforms.
ch 0 7 Lovely Ms. Marvel
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Nope, not her.
ch 0 6 A Fantastic And Marvelous Introduction
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I see. Thank you for the input.
"Doom heard that, Richards! Doom is NOT stupid!"
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Well, critics exist to help writers too. I know I'm not perfect, and there's you guys who fill in what I miss and get wrong XD
"Doom heard that, Richards! Doom is NOT stupid!"
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Huh. I just checked, and you're right, lol. It seems google failed me, since the last time I checked, it was "succubuses", not "succubi". Thanks for pointing that out XD
Lucifer giggles again, prompts Wilhelm to roll his eyes. Simultaneously, the succubuses seem to snap out of their stupors and gape at they turn to the ruler of Hell.
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