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Interesting characters and nice pacing! I love to see the improvement in writing with each chapter. Easy to follow along. Keep it the good work!
Action · Theothegiant
I'm not typically one for the harem genre, but this one pulled me in. An interesting concept, and I love the added system! The writing flows really well, and there's a nice balance between dialogue and narration.
Fantasy · MisterBombastic
It's interesting to see how the author improves with each chapter! I like the dialogue, but I'd also love to see more narration and detail. Excited to see how the story progresses! Keep it up :)
Action · Patience_Agboola
This novel has great potential- it has an interesting and engaging concept, and the depth of narration pulls you in. There are errors in grammar and punctuation; I suggest that the author proofread and take their time to ensure a better flow of sentences. I'll keep an eye on this novel; I'm excited to see how it progresses, and I'm looking forward to future updates!
Fantasy · Brandon_5903
The author has a very strong narrative voice, and I like the balance of conversation. Nice long chapters and an interesting concept that pulls you in to read more! I can't wait to read future updates!
Fantasy · Blissful_ChaotiC
Very interesting read, it's nice to see how the story progresses and i'm interested in reading more! Dialogue is fun and the whole story is captivating
Action · AYESHA_FAHIM
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Interesting characters and nice pacing! I love to see the improvement in writing with each chapter. Easy to follow along. Keep it the good work!
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Action · Theothegiant