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Woohoo! New chapter! Thank you
Money and time
Gamer of the Seas
Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus
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[The New World, The Ruins of Naufragium Island]
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
revenge -> ravaged?
[The New World, The Ruins of Naufragium Island]
One Piece: Path to Power
Anime & Comics · Paradox_
This novel is brilliant, thank you!
ch 0 7 Chapter 3: Ability Discovered
The Trope System
Fantasy · Turtle034
dungeons -> portals (because Mr J's not a gamer)
"Of course. Anything for Sky. Come, you three. If you are all going back you need to learn some stuff about the dungeons I've been in."
Gamer of the Seas
Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus
fate -> faith*
The fact that the Gods need fate makes it even more so as there will certainly be wars for believers as they are to a certain extent the source of their power.
Awakening: Lord Of The Unknown
Fantasy · VQuintessence
Hatsuhisa Hyuga*
As they return, Fang Mo doesn't forget about Hinata Hatsuhisa, occasionally teaching her some combat skills and sharing food from Steve's backpack.
Reborn with Steve Stand
Anime & Comics · Bleam
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 0 9 T Virus III
Awakening: Lord Of The Unknown
Fantasy · VQuintessence
Thanks for the chapter
ch 0 6 Zombies
Awakening: Lord Of The Unknown
Fantasy · VQuintessence
WN fricked up my comment for some reason, I hope it's readable
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I'm in Hyrule? - A Zelda Fanfic.
Video Games · Mctoasty_Jr
fauna -> flora*fauna = animalsflora = plants
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I'm in Hyrule? - A Zelda Fanfic.
Video Games · Mctoasty_Jr
Lexus -> Cyruz
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Legend's Regression
Action · Unleashed_Echo
Thanks for the chapter
ch 0 5 The Tower (4)
Legend's Regression
Action · Unleashed_Echo
Thanks for the chapter. Please don't drop, this novel is really good
ch 0 4 The Tower (3)
Legend's Regression
Action · Unleashed_Echo
exploited -> revealed (or uncovered). I think it fits much better here
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One Piece: Struggle of the Weak [Reboot]
Anime & Comics · BravoBuds
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 0 7 Escort Mission?!
The Nidaime Otokage
Anime & Comics · Turtle034
Thanks for the chapter!
ch 27 Chapter XVI: Choosing schools and visiting the staff maker
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
'his/her' can be shortened to 'their' which is gender neutral and is often used in situations where you don't want to name a singular gender or fear to misgender
"That's less than I expected. But there are two types of slaves, those who are not bound by a slave contract, and those who are bound by a slave contract. I'm sure you all remember the piece of paper that has the slave bound to his/her owner, correct?"
Gamer of the Seas
Fantasy · DemonGodHiatus