Webnovel Author: Bruscar - Fanfic Collection

are you still alive author? I loved your story and I hope you don't drop it and I don't know if you have a release schedule or anything.

Now you have a super material, perfect for making heavy hypersonic projectiles. I doubt that most DC villains can withstand a hit from a 1 ton carbonarium projectile at 20 kilometers per second.

Why not?

There is a Japanese children's series with a lot of super strong technologies, from time travel to teleportation and even reality manipulation. The series is called Doraemon the Cosmic Cat and its technologies would return to Batman Op

In Dragon Ball there are few melee moves that combine with ki. An idea could be some pointed ki knuckles or two sharp blades on the knuckles as well. or similar themes, I think it is something that is missing a lot in the series and that has a lot of potential.

I know you don't want to make an op character from the beginning but any Dragon Ball fan would have thought about gravity training and anyone with a little imagination could have thought about underwater training at high pressures, which could be even more harder than gravity alone. Maybe your plan is to put it in now but I also see that you nerfed your character quite a bit, something that I don't see as bad at all if it had logical reasons

Why not nanobots with nuclear bombs attached ?

I need the metric system please, at least put the two types of measurements, one in parentheses so it will be easier for us Europeans who read this

The technology you were talking about about digital minds is practically the AI ​​technology of the HALO universe. They analyze the brains of deceased people to create AI, with Cortana being the first to be created from a living brain.

Better a super strong 3 meter tall Batman Custodes, the criminals of Gotham would be scared after seeing that.

a fairly powerful weapon that you can use on the bfg 10000 and its small version of doom that thing made a hole in mars and is the size of a naval cannon, it is op

a relatively simple weapon that bruce can make, it's a cold fusion bomb, in itself it's like making an ark reactor but ready to explode, it's a weapon similar to nuclear but clean, and you could even make one that releases radiation similar to a red sun, perfect for kryptonians, since it uses the same concept as the sun, merging two light atoms into a heavier one.

You need this droid? Ethan

author how about using technologies from the warhammer 40k universe. some are very broken, not to mention that there are weapons of global annihilation perfect to eliminate alien threats, not to mention that if you could go back to bruce a few custodians could defeat him, although his height would give him away a bit. I also recommend the technologies of the universe space battleship yamato. It has a power reactor far superior to the improved ark reactor and antimatter weapons, including one capable of destroying entire continents that is mounted on a 300-meter ship.

Regarding damage issues, I think you should leave it as if you were playing at maximum difficulty. I have the bad luck of not having played any halo but I have read a lot of fan fic and I follow a lot of people. You should also take into account basic things like that the spartan's energy shield is not the same in halo 1 as it is in halo 5, due to the development of technology and the like. besides that titanium A is very bad with plasma. I would make the protagonist suffer a lot with the weapons of the covenant, because I understand that it can resist human cartridges but it is illogical with plasma, which itself is based on melting everything it touches. As for the Star Wars story, I for one am not interested in that premise. although you could see some story told from the separatist side.

The reason that the humans in avatar have such "simple" equipment is because they are mercenaries, they are not a formal army, in addition to the fact that for the trip they cannot carry machinery that is too advanced that requires full logistical support. They have to bring equipment that is easy to maintain and that its spare parts are easy to produce. Also, finally, the resistance of the natives is destined to be in vain, the reason is very simple, while they play with sticks and stones, humanity, despite the bad state it is in in that universe, continues to advance technologically, and it will come the day where instead of being attacked by a group of mercenaries, they will receive an exterminatus

You should have separated the chapter into two chapters one about the end of the training and the loss of his team and another about the increases and at the same time that you will detail things better, time jumps like this are somewhat awkward

considering the anomaly of the MC it would be too strange that they did not make a specific program for him, he has all the ingredients to surpass the spartan 2 not to mention that his genes could increase the compatibility of the increases to other candidates facilitating the mass production of super soldiers. while it's not exactly what the unsc needs it's quite welcome. ps: what the uncs needs are technological geniuses more than supersoldiers, but these are also useful.

You mention that the halos and the forrunners are on a universal scale when all that happens only in the Milky Way and if the halos were to prevent them from escaping to other galaxies and later other universes. be careful with those details