Just curious, what is your ethnicity author? like your ancestor's origin.
ch 563 Charm of a Prince Charming
Eastern · Anvelope
I know it's already too late but here is my two cents, the sudden shift of mc's character is too abrupt and unlogical. It's like with a snap of a finger he is a new person(ego). my suggestion is make a timeline. like months or days
ch 54 The Fall of the Mighty
Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
thank you for the chapter author... I don't know how much you earn on this novel or if you're earning anything... but if your earnings is enough, I hope you make it a full time work/hobby, more frequent update. One of the reasons why readers are dropping novels is because the updates are slow... good thing is every chapters are good and worth the read.
ch 517 Chapter 511 : Hiruzen's Decision!
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
Did you watched every naruto movies, ovas, arc, and Shippuden? Because if you haven't, you definitely should, especially the episodes before shippuden. You can get a lot of writing materials and ideas, like the stone of gelel, chakra armour, hero water, nine masked beast, chimera techniques, and shiromari.
ch 469 Chapter 464 : AoE Vacuum Jutsu
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
question, what do you get if I'am gifting you power stones?
ch 467 Chapter 462 : Forcing Danzo to Teach!
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
dude, of all the Naruto fanfics, yours is the best. I can even put this fanfic in top 10 in original novels. And as a naruto fan since 2005, I can say you did good. Fight scenes are superb, writing quality✅, world background✅, flesh-out side characters✅, and the plot is good. the mc got his strength through hardwork,no bs plot armor. kuddos to that... We can also see that you are putting a lot of effort and a lot of braincells into this fic. And We really appreciate that... So thank you for making this fic
ch 387 Chapter 384 : Explosions!
Fantasy · Devil_Hex
did he syphon the souls?
ch 33 Power to control metal objects
Action · don_offl
the sudden shift of the mood is kinda off-putting.. the plot armor thickens
ch 283 Change of Leadership?
Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
Fantasy · RVN_1998