kadethornbush

kadethornbush

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This is actually a account i made really for the use of my book ideas I want to write

2020-02-10 Joined United States
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kadethornbush
kadethornbush
2 years ago
Commented

Can you stop putting the patreon link at the start and end of every chapter, like just put it on your profile page and if someone wants to subscribe they will

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kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Posted

Only read the first chapter up until he selected his bloodline. I’m dropped immediately after because dragons are so overused in 90 percent story that I just won’t read another one in the near future. Good luck to the author.

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Replied to kadethornbush

Chapter 18

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Posted

The pace of the story is just too fast for my liking and here is not build up at all he just gains 1000 something followers within a few days and he already had holy knight by chapter 20. Im not a fan of the MC at all honestly just his personality is the main reason why im dropping this book.

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Replied to Space_kook

No this would not be cool 😂, dragons are absolutely overrated

There are various ways to wield the spear. Some wield the spear as if it was an extension of their arms, focusing on the simplicity of the spear to show its greatest power. Some wield the spear as is, focusing on amplifying the benefits of wielding the spear to its greatest limit. Then, there are those who wield the spear as if it was a living creature, turning into a far more lethal weapon than the other two.

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

Games · TrueDawn

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Posted

Honestly was really looking forward to reading this book because of the summary but the way it was executed was absolutely horrendous. The pace is horrendous as well the MC was able to fight and slaughter half of 2000+ forces so there was really no build up either. Then the mc choose to be a damn dragon which is pretty generic, his subordinates are not likeable either like one of the previous comment mentioned he could have saved the governor and kept him at the position but instead chose to make a evil person he had just met his subordinate/govern.

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Commented

This is exactly what I feared would happened smh

"All of you... need to become companions with the goblins... Understand?!"

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

Eastern · BLACKangelmarl

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Replied to Abyss_Edge

Noooo that’s used in almost every dungeon story smh

After some time, Argon finally chose the great wolf den. It didn't really matter which one he chose between the two, as the first floor could accommodate two tribes or dens at the same time.

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

I Created A Dungeon In A Cultivation World

Eastern · BLACKangelmarl

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Commented

When will he use the contract creation spell that he got in his first class upgrade that animal he killed could have a good companion

kadethornbush
kadethornbush
3 years ago
Replied to Champsing

Not really anything new because most of them start off with getting this ultra rare class and then starting on a mega quest after leveling a bit