Webnovel Author: Sour_coffe48 - Novel Collection

You're evil, leaving us on a cliff hanger 😭

Author-san you did something very very few other story's have managed to do, you made my stingy self spend money on your story. I love the story and characters alot please keep up the good work.

I liked the song and the over all feel of it can't wait for more, also did you make a instrumental for this one cause in my head I just imagined piano the hole time with maybe a lil guitar at some points

Likes: The plot thickens 😁 I liked the release of the song and Shiros philosophical side, Shiro being the perfectionist he always is, as well as you still making Shiros biological mom still relevant (also little half sibling/siblings perhaps?) Dislikes: well I don't really have any dislikes but I'm pretty sure there are certain holo en members that could fit the bill for a soft singer so the only things I can think of is that Shiro wasn't close enough to said members to ask in such short notice orrrrr you wanted an excuse for Shiro to interact with his sister. Ps: It doesn't matter too much it's just that seemed like a little plot hole to me. Pps: keep up the good work😁 Ppps: hehe I said pepe😂

Nice chapter, keep up the good work fine sir.

well uhhh... I'm sorry, it's been months since I've read this story so I fell behind but luckily I came back and binge read till I was caught up so... yeah that's good. I enjoyed all of the chapters I really like how the plot isn't too predictable or how you have some nice original ideas. as for the bad, I only have two real complaints one being that pretty much all of the critique Shiro has gotten has been positive, there hasn't been any real insults or negative comments or even constrictive criticism. The second complaint I have is the label stuff, it's not a big deal but depending on where you take it in the future it my sour me a bit, but other then that nice story keep it up and expect more in depth comments on the newer chapters.

sounds about right ✨ ,

I'm waiting for Shiro to get a call from Cali on discord about the "guh"

sometimes I forget this is a harem fic. G-good chapter. (that meeting went different then I thought)

nice chapter keep up da good work👍

I decided to leave this comment separate from my original one just because it's literally just a funny idea that I had that I'm sharing with you. So the idea is, Shiro teaching one of the other holostars/hololivers that have absolutely no experience at all how to rap I don't now who this could be done with or if you would even do it but the whole process of it would be hilarious. idk who you could use for this off the dome I would pick gura or ame(as far as I'm aware neither of them have done anything close to rap besides the doctor Suse things) just cause I think there gremlin energy in rap would be hilarious. and just so where clear I'm not demanding you to do this I'm just saying it's a potential idea.

thanks for the chapter I now spirits are low because of Rushia's contract being terminated I may have never been a extremely avid fan of her but I still feel the lose. Ok time for criticism I loved it, the energy of the stream was great some pretty good questions answered over all very nice chapter. I will say I seen someone point out how no one asked bout that mask and I didn't think about it at all but if this was real everyone would we asking bout it.

Thanks for the great chapter can't wait for the next. I do think maby when doing the live streams you should include chat a little more other then that I really have no other complaints.👍

I definitely agree with this dude

ignore my bad grammar

another day another chapter another review. What to say bout this chapter it was a good a chapter. I liked the stream and the collab stuff seems cool. I will say compared to the last couple of chapters that felt plot progression heavy this felt lighter but it was still a nice chapter and uhhh I can't wait for the next one.

just a little response to your response of my comments. I don't know for sure because I don't post on SoundCloud but I'm sure there is some way to give it a description and if so you could put in the description the purpose of said music and where to find the story so if someone one on SoundCloud stumbles upon it they can read if they want and understand what shiros bgm means. I don't know for certain just tryin to help out.(also I dont know for certain but I'm going off the assumption that all the music shiro likes you like as well and if so that means we have a pretty much identical taste in music)

just a little heads up you have the bgm and loading screen music on private so the only way to hear it is with the exact links and for whatever reason It won't let me copy and paste so I had to type in every dahm letter it would probably be better it you took them off private and just gave people your acc name so they can find you easier.(they both sound great btw)