I really don't like when they show or introduce Mc as cold hearted and calculating but when a heroine come he becomes a dimwit And thing is even the world is fantasy fiction but for me a 10year boy talking like an adult is a huge turnoff And first his hate for goddess but for not any defined reason was also a forced situation
i want to ask will you change mc character because of a female because I have seen in lots of novel when mc become soft because of female lead
Author You really did a good job 👍 I really like the MC character and the world building is also good . And I just hope and request don't drop this because finally a novel that suits my taste with good grammar and character Keep updating author I will support you
I have One request can you just stop mentioning in each how vampire was the strongest and human were trash and can you not give detailed overview of the world powers structure
I am really like the plot of ur novel but there is a thing that i really don't like system novel when the system force a mission on mc and it feels like mc follows the path system set for him
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Primordial Vampire God System
Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth
just really getting annoyed by this sister and how easily his sister expected to believe he lost his memory and patiently explaining everything and not once she believes he is not her brother
yeah I found another site which whole 220 chapter but it too slow to load probably take 3 to 4 minutes to load next chapter that's why I dropped it
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supreme rank should be at top because it's supreme not in between of other realms
Martial arts was divided into several realms such as mortal rank , warrior rank , master rank , grandmaster rank , supreme rank , domain and void rank . An average human will find it extremely hard to become a warrior except for those gifted geniuses . With my talent I could only become a master rank artist but suddenly I awkened the system . The system seemed to have different functions that I am still exploring them . Then I aimed to become a powerhouse of a generation.
The martial lord
Eastern · victor Antonio
No bro it's not the same novel I have already read the raw u have written but it's different from the above mentioned
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dropped*
The Storms monarch is an extra
Fantasy · APieceOfRock